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For Sara Jama Contest ~ Kaleidoscope of Emotional Suffering

Premiere Contest WinnerKaleidoscope of Suffering

Trust bleeds as a future forger,
created by sinister seeds
of the satanic sun 
and poisoned pearls
of the malignant moon,
an infectious inflammation
blurring the vulnerable
voice of inner vessels, with verses 
circling in ruby-smoked redness…

I rise exhausted, remorsefully
consumed in self-inflicted pain,
burning to feel the night choke
the last rites of hope ~
that the poetic pulse of the dusk
insidiously fingered
like a doleful dreamscape,
dotted with dark skin
of an elegiac requiem,
into this cracked conscience ~
for these scars of thinning light
serenade scented illusions,
as if every pause between
potent promises
were an augural omen
of an inevitable inconvenience.

I have been drowning in the seething 
sea of an incurable illness,
a kaleidoscope of emotional suffering, 
while this onyx heart
refuses the rhythm
of gothic romanticism,
and love is but a rainbow-colored rose
breathing in a crystal-kohl casket,
longing to be free from fears
and passionate threats of desire…

Tonight, I summon you, 
my cosmic flame, O angel 
who heralds the Lion’s Gate,
where Sirius sears
like the golden chains
of heaven and hell-tides,
to break me and teach me
how the loyalty of love
erases all depths of doubt.

I have known nothing but
the exhilarating path
to heal along the highways
where hurt runs in acceleration,
speeding through the streets
soaked in stressed syllables
of missteps stumbling over
ragged roads cemented in confusion ~
madness merged with mistrust,
weaponizing wounds with words 
that cut like claymore flames…

So wander amidst weariness,
seduce me with mosaic metaphors,
walk me through
the cemetery of uncertainty
to reveal an eternity
carved with bones ~
unfamiliar with betrayal.
Bury the ghosts of raven thorns,
silence the cryptic ceremonial
bells ringing with paranoia,
reveal to me a translucent twilight
that speaks no dialect of deceit,
and let your skies hold no other
but my ink, 
      swathed in velvet   r
                                    a  i
                                      n…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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MITRA Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 10:28 PM
Wow-work, Iridescent Ink! 👏 I can well descry that thou writest thy posey out of sheer passion! So let thy hue-abounding quill take wing, rock, and roll—full-throated and riotous—unto Molkie Cole! May every stroke bleed colour, every line swagger with life, and thy ink run gloriously where mere words dare not tread! ✨
Jama Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 5:22 PM
Congratulations on placing first in my contest. The way you weave dark metaphors eloquently like brush strokes upon a gothic canvas is beautifully painful. "I have been drowning in the seething sea of an incurable illness," this line hit particularly hard. Amazing as always. And fantastic picture choice.🔥
George Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 2:33 AM
A poem overwhelming with emotions of melancholy. "...missteps stumbling over ragged roads cemented in confusion ~ madness merged with mistrust, weaponizing wounds with words that cut like claymore flames…" . Flames of pain rise from my heart too. "I have been drowning in the seething sea of an incurable illness, a kaleidoscope of emotional suffering," With startling honesty, you have unraveled the emotional suffering you undergo. Your anguish is not contrived, but felt in every pulse. 😢Your wounded mind's pain touches every sensitive heart and the pain lingers long after it is read. Your poem on the whole sounds like 'an elegiac requiem'. Exceptional talent. Relax sweetie...! May life gift you with happy times ahead.🙏 10 out of 10. Congratulations on your trophy win. 👍👏💕
Empress Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 2:51 AM
Awwn sweet soul Valsa, i teared up reading your empathetic response! Thank you so very much sincerely! I am touched by your kindness. Sending you light always 🌹
Jones Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 7:53 PM
Another masterpiece earning you top win congratulations dear Inky! “Bury the ghosts of raven thorns, silence the cryptic ceremonial bells ringing with paranoia, reveal to me a translucent twilight that speaks no dialect of deceit, and let your skies hold no other but my ink, swathed in velvet rain” gorgeous!😊
Empress Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 2:52 AM
Thank you so much sweet soul Karen. I appreciate you so very much. Sending you light always 💫
Cornish Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 10:27 AM
Now, when you inspire streams of condolences, it morphs from fiction to reality!---soup mail
Empress Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 1:19 AM
I appreciate always your visits dear craigszy, thank you so much for your also beautiful heart touching soupmail. Sending you light always ~ 💫
Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 12:30 AM
The picture you used goes so well with your poem and the dark topic of suffering. I don't think I can even do a poem on this subject but I see it's very popular with the free verse poets. You do gothic metaphors so well, Ink 🥰
Empress Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 1:23 AM
I know sweet soul aunt. Only few contests allow me to be myself freely. Haha. A bit scary for some Appreciate always your sweet visits Sending you light always 💋
Hind Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 10:31 PM
absolutely breathed Ink <3
Empress Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 1:27 AM
Thank you so much sweet soul 💋 💜
G  Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:10 PM
Arrggh! I felt my throat closing well before I got to "night choke" - so emotive! Eek! The cemetery of uncertainty!!! How do you think of these word pairing that utterly immerse from beginning to end!? Amazing write! I was trying to think when I wrote a poem about highways and cars for a second and then I remembered haha! Aww sweet (I think!) that it inspired some of these lines 😅
G  Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 10:31 AM
Too kind Craig 🥰
Cornish Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 10:24 AM
Ah...what a gifted quill you share
Empress Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:51 PM
Hahaha i know what you mean. I am the same, gosh time flies 😂
G  Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:47 PM
Haha that poem is a week old, I'm not even the same person anymore 😅
Empress Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 12:37 PM
Haha we talk too much about too many things. Haha and write too much too! 😱 u are an inspiration for me! Your way of expressing is unique! Can you post that poem here? Its so good! And can i just say! I am excited and thrilled to have you visit n comment on this. This was an intense poem I know haha. Someone commented saying get well soon to me. Thank you for the visit … sending you light always
Beaufort Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 11:01 AM
IE, your poetry points the way to self-healing. It's a recipe for self-examination that suggests turning to something hopeful. We can look at our memories and hopefully frame them in a way that we can forgive past events and despair...the kind that you describe with such vivid images. While this was produced for a contest, my perception of many of your poems is that they are meant to heal. It's rather amazing, and the way you do it really astounds me. I am smiling and in awe. Sending smiles 2 U!
Empress Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 1:34 AM
Poetry is cathartic ~ healing yes dear Duke, you are so very observant! Thank you so much. For always being so kind and supportive! I enjoy seeing you smile too haha It can be intense little bit I know Sending you light always 💫 🌙
DiMino Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 10:24 AM
"that the poetic pulse of the dusk insidiously fingered like a doleful dreamscape," -- Fascinating expression! "to break me and teach me how the loyalty of love erases all depths of doubt." -- Not easy to do, for the heart never entirely forgets its failures. "walk me through the cemetery of uncertainty to reveal an eternity" -- the hand of faith not always enough company. Don't know that what you seek can be found solely on earth? Great writing!
Sharma  Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 9:02 AM
Omg and that ending " reveal to me a translucent twilight that speaks no dialect of deceit, and let your skies hold no other but my ink, swathed in velvet rain..."😢❤️‍🔥🌹❤️‍🩹🔥 I really can't get enough of the honestly and transperancy here! It feels like a bleed from the heart.. so beautiful and so raw! The imagery and metaphors, everything is just poetically ethereal! Just love this so much, my dear ink, sending you best wishes for the contest! Mermaid moonbeams and starry magic all across reaching youuuuu!!! Luv and light 🌙🌹🌹🔥
Sharma  Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 9:00 AM
Ahh the ache and melancholy here.. I have no words.. such pain you've described here and I feel very familiar with this.. the silence suffering, the kaleidoscopic vulnerablity and the self-inflicted isolation..all leading to the sabotage of the soul.. "Tonight, I summon you, my cosmic flame, O angel who heralds the Lion’s Gate, where Sirius sears like the golden chains of heaven and hell-tides" Ohh that stanza goshhh! Left me breathless in every way.. crystal-kohl casket, mosaic metaphors
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 6:39 AM
This certainly is the epitome of emotional suffering as seen through the kaleidoscope of insane imagery, gotta love those paranoid bells, and ragged roads cemented with confusion (brilliant metaphors), infused with unique innovative alliteration, beautifully penned and presented Ink, you really are a talent to behold, cheers David
Empress Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 8:30 AM
Thank you so very much dear David, those metaphors youv highlighted were some I thought of after a conversation with our fave poetess LG. About highways and car rides ~ and a poem she also wrote on something similar. I am so glad you noticed. I guess my taste in music influenced my way of expressing too. I am so grateful to hve you here to support me.and compliment me. Sending you light always! 🥳
Lane Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 6:23 AM
Purple, the color of passion and you show the depth of yours here. Actually, Ink, you expose it in everything you write. Suffering comes in many colors, but I most often associate it with blue... melancholy blue.
Empress Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 8:33 AM
Awwn you talk so Hawt linnersz hahaha 😂 for me actually suffering comes in red and black but purple is my fave color! I love " melancholy blue" its always an honor to have your support. Thank you so much . Sending you light always 💋
Wolf Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 7:36 PM
If you'd like, I can ask AI to make an appointment for you right away at an urgent care clinic. I believe that they now carry just the right type of rain. ~ Phan E. Bone
Empress Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 8:35 AM
Why not, ofcourse nowadays, people are also getting married to AI. I might not like that tho because AI could be a people pleaser 😂 thank you for your fun and wonderful presence always Sending you light always
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 10:25 AM
- A poem with overwhelming emotions, Ink - An anxiety that chases the body, automatically turns into pondering - A smile can cover crying .., crying can cover suffering - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Bordner Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 7:46 AM
Love has a way of reducing us to a denuded heart...distilling the energy of our souls into a humble desire for shared experience. This poem reinforces this perspective for me Poetess...J.A.B.
Empress Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:30 AM
The way you describe things is extraordinary ~ so unique. From your poetry and comments, it sounds like you really understand love. I would say you seem like a bit of a Love Guru. I certainly wouldn’t mind learning a little more from your wisdom and knowledge. Thank you for touching my poem with your empathy. Sending you light always dear Justin 💫 🥰
Bayles Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 6:49 AM
Such a vivid description of pain. The rain at the end is a surprise, cleansing, I hope.
Empress Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:24 AM
Thank you for noticing dear Mike, It is cathartic. This poem. I had to revisit certain darkness to touch this theme. I appreciate your visit and support. Sending you light always.
Liguori Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 5:42 AM
‘ how the loyalty of love erases all depths of doubt’… in an imperfect world it’s novel to think that true love exists! Ah, wouldn’t it be grand? Your poem is miraculous, as always.
Empress Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:19 AM
I hope someday, you will experience love, with someone who wouldnt lose their marbles over mundane errors. Thank you dear Robert. Sending you light always...
Hayward Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 4:35 AM
No-one can express themselves as beautifully as you with your extraordinarily multi-layered poetry. Like the appetizer, mains and dessert all in one, intertwined....
Empress Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:14 AM
Thank you so much for being so very supportive, I appreciate you saying that. It can be a bit of a heavy meal sometimes ~ my poems. Lol sending you light always
Onpaper Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 3:34 AM
Trust bleeds as a future forger, created by sinister seeds of the satanic sun and poisoned pearls of the malignant moon,.. oooo papi… look at u making my heart skip a beat or two with your perfection.. I have been drowning in the seething sea of an incurable illness,.. aaah dnt called the great kundhalini sakthi illnesss!!! kaleidoscope of emotional suffering, .. SUFFER NO MOREEEE!!! Papi is here.. speeding through the streets soaked in stressed syllables of missteps stumbling over ragged roads cemented in confusion … oooo alliteratioooons papi!!! let your skies hold no other but my ink,.. heed my words!!! I shall nevaaaaar smelll , what hold ?.. smell, touch … dip into any ink aeeee !!! Tis the perfect pigment of ur ink that it shall behold !!!!!!!
Empress Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:43 AM
Rolling hahahhah 😂
Onpaper Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:42 AM
Hahahahah wat date ???? I am already bound to u papi!!! Bound beyond breakage!!!! This dating bating is child play…we r much more than the mere word of dating aeeee !!!! Yea this mothering I cannot aeee … if I wanna mother someone I’ll birth that fella on my own … jk .. them little whiny nuggets are pure angels🕊️… I guess
Empress Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:35 AM
Helloi papi dont expose me like that! Haha 😂 yea they did throw some interesting tantrums.. i must say you should run from such silliness. We dont have time for mothering their insecurities. I am one to talk. 😂 would you date me papi if you were a guy! Dont lie
Onpaper Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:29 AM
Hahahahaha … one can only hope to find a non sense that made a little sense 😂…pity them???.. I had to walk away!!!! It was causing my brain cells to fade away!!!! Not like I already had loads to spare ae !!! Also be honest … even u were annoyed with their tantrums aeee !!! I had to block … or walk awaaay … or disappear.. rite now my last ex has mssged me asking if I saw his mssg on fb… meanwhile um still ignoring his mssg from everywhere else.. so u tell me …. Must I!!!!!!!!!😂😂
Empress Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:21 AM
Oh please they never make sense to you papi! I know you very well! I studied you! I am graduating from papi school tomorrow! Tomorrow never dies! Hahaha 😂 i remember how you handled their tantrums! Pity them! Their self-esteem must be long buried 🤧🥺
Onpaper Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:16 AM
Hahahaha … let the kundalini go craYyyy!!! I’ll rub u the right way aeee !!! 🥹… aaaah dating is a whole different ball game .. if he need to make sense with his tantrums at least… so far their little tantrums are stupid!!! So give up la … atleast if it was charming maybe I wud be a lil more understanding?.. no?… 🤔😂
Empress Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 9:12 AM
Kundalini is out of control lately papi! Tsk 🥲🥰 haha you are so adorable! But ofcourse you wont be this sweet and understanding and loving to your whoever in life you date! Dont pretend 🤣 i la u long time
Onpaper Avatar
August 9, 2026 at 3:35 AM
I forgot abt emojisss… lemme enter here ✍️🕊️✍️✍️📖✍️✍️✍️👀👀
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