Justification of the Prime

One space towards my realm
  Two words, Time Flashes, that is why I go
While they seem to grow on leaves
   Of praises that reach no ears of life
The love speaks for itself
   Not one freed inside young minds
Living in space, crumpling in time
  Nowhere to say we move onwards
But that of justification of the prime
    Nowhere to stay but the homeless
Realms of reality, reaching
  Onward, straight through but not finding
What you desire, not listening
     To which transpires in wordlessness
That she says, no she doesn’t say it
    But it is restless between the sounds
Of time and where the spheres
     Of space seem to escape onwards
Whenever it grows beyond our spectrum
  Words seem to lie off the floor
Nowhere to go, but towards the door
    Nothing believes more than the heartache
Which she creates, storm passes
   But this…lasts forever within my mind
And I will hear it as time flashes
    Beyond that of the trees that leaves
Nothing in the winter but frozen
     Tundra of heartache, she expresses
Fine-tuned and storm crashing between
    One timeless escape, lost within
Never home again, the bottom fills the world
   That I live in…

Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/17/2017 6:22:00 PM
I don't like her, Russell! Better she's "never home again."
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Date: 9/17/2017 8:14:00 AM
Wow, a deeply written poem, yet smooth to read. Well expressed. Great work Russell! :)
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Date: 9/17/2017 7:52:00 AM
Very deep in thoughts--a reflection on life --feelings well described--good one Russell!
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Date: 9/17/2017 7:38:00 AM
Those things that cut most deeply can be in weapon form of a tongue. Harsh words stay with us far longer that leaves that fall in Autumn winds. We cannot sweep away the memories. This is contextually vivid, Russell.
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Date: 9/17/2017 6:49:00 AM
Russell a pondering and thought provoking write, well done
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