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Just To Sit Outside

Just to Sit Outside I never was a gardener, But I’d love to dig a hole, To hold a spade and feel black dirt, But alas, I have grown old. To sit outside under the stars, Watch the planes fly overhead; To pray for happy passengers, That they be safe, meet their goals before they’re dead. To sit outside under wispy clouds To think nor fear fearful bites; To say hello to a nocturnal cat, Peruse the creatures of the night. To sit outside in the afternoon, As neighbors used to do, But children don’t visit porch sitters now; They have too much to do. To sit outside in the cool twilight, And picture life in the sleepy homes, And hope no one who lives in them Will ever be alone. I would sit outside alone or not, Though today it’s 100 degrees. And I am in that time of life. Inbound with old age disease. If you should read this poem of mine Take heed in your days of frantic, To build in your soul sweet memories for When you sit outside under the stars….alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/12/2018 7:19:00 AM
I don't normally read longer poems much, but you kept this one interesting. This is a sweet poem of appreciating simple things. Thank you for sharing. Well done!.......pat
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Date: 8/10/2018 9:17:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Sunlite. Like the last stanza the most.
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Date: 8/10/2018 5:33:00 PM
This poem warmed my heart Sunlite! I manage a way to attract the kid's attention because they keep you young. They love to share what they have experienced. They are all about fun and it is a joy to be around them. Your poem is a poignant reminder to keep those you love in your life so you will never be lonely. : )
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Date: 8/9/2018 7:03:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful and cheerful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/9/2018 9:44:00 AM
I am so glad you spent your time to read and comment so kindly.
Date: 8/8/2018 4:33:00 PM
Very nicely written Sunlite. I enjoyed this. It reminds me of the peace of sitting outside sifting through memories and how important special times are in our lives because of what it is like to be alone too :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/9/2018 9:43:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi. I so appreciate your comments.
Date: 8/8/2018 12:58:00 PM
Happy moments find a home, when you are outside observing, contemplating..a cheerful poem you wrote, SW.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/9/2018 9:43:00 AM
Thank you - a comment from Vijay - treasured.
Date: 8/8/2018 11:22:00 AM
You can stir some sweet memories in your mind...sitting on the porch of your life...Nice write SW
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 8/9/2018 9:43:00 AM
Thank you for reading this long one, and commenting!

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