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Just Peachy

The moon ripe as a Georgia peach, plopped itself upon the blue-blackened, scalloped edge of the deciduous forest, topping the syrupy squiggle of horizon as it bled into the blue velvet night.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/3/2011 8:47:00 PM

WOWIE, This is GOOD!!! congrats.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/30/2011 10:44:00 AM

Congrats on yur win..I knew it would be a winner. BG

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 10/30/2011 12:52:00 AM

Congrats Debbie.Thanks for sharing and also for your info on the HAIKU site.Million hand shakes and kisses to you my good friend...keep flying .......

Margaret Foster

Date: 10/28/2011 11:26:00 PM

Congratulations Debbie. beautiful imagery you paint here. well done...Margaret

John Freeman

Date: 10/28/2011 5:00:00 PM

Great to see your poem with a top win Debbie. Congratulations on your worthy endeavor. Agape, Moses

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/28/2011 2:55:00 PM

Food references always work well for this reader...very nice write, Debbie. Congrats on this delicious write. Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/28/2011 12:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Upto Five" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/18/2009 8:51:00 AM

Hi Deb!I feel this poem expresses your talent in 5-line perfection! I think this poem could grace the cover of Georgia's Dept. of Tourism! and single handedly be responsible for the huge response! fav...fav... you can see I think its PEACHY! love, your friend, jimmy

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/8/2009 4:11:00 AM

And a peachy write this is. Beautiful picture here. Loved it. Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/8/2009 3:24:00 AM

Wow, Deborah! That is quite an excellent image. Beautiful- (By the way, we recently bought some delicious, juicy, mouth watering Georgia peaches from a roadside vendor... SWEET dripped everywhere. It was yummy, like your poem.)

Hana Ryusaka

Date: 7/7/2009 4:24:00 PM

Beautiful images here, Deborah. I love the "scalloped edge of the deciduous forest." Lovely.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/7/2009 4:20:00 PM

Very descriptive. Sara

Frances King

Date: 7/7/2009 3:02:00 PM

This is not just any peach ... it is a Georgia peach! Mmmm, mouth-watering! Thanks for your thoughts on "Settled", I've asked for opinions on which 2 lines to leave out. When I get some comments, I'll change it to sonnet form.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 7/7/2009 2:28:00 PM

Deborah~Wow Now I'll never think of peaches the same way! Tasty forest Wonderfully done! Laura:)

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/7/2009 1:25:00 PM

Now, after seeing your fabulous photos....I am picturing that ripe moon plopping itself down behind that stone house in Maine...into the scalloped deciduous forest !! Yummy poem!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/7/2009 1:07:00 PM

Great one..this is delicious. BG

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/7/2009 1:05:00 PM

WOW my Guzzi friend,this is going to my favs-your writes are spectecular--love charma ;-)