White Wolf Poet Sonnet

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Just Look Into My Eyes

For these moments in time that I'm with you
At a loss for words to try and explain
I know in my heart that you feel it too
For you make my whole world appear so sane

We give to each other a warmth so true
You are my flower and I am your dawn
For I am the grass and you are the dew
Whenever I'm with you I feel reborn

How do I express what you mean to me
Shall I start with a song with melody
Shall I paint a picture with imagery
Please tell me dear for I need you to see

There is no way to make you realize
Just trust me, dear, just look into my eyes

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Lenna Walker July 11, 2017 at 12:26 PM wow, a sweet write here Rick. Congrats on POTD, well deserved. I am trying to read a lot that I have missed, I just can't seem to catch up ....... enjoyed the read :) White Wolf July 11, 2017 at 12:40 PM Thank you, Lenna! Nice to see you again /|\

Chuck Melugin July 9, 2017 at 4:15 AM Wolf....there you go....kicking poetic butt,,,,,as usual and the pic..... wow wow!! here I am....as usual....in admiration.....wearing out the 7's Your student, chuck

Janice Canerdy July 8, 2017 at 9:05 AM POTD, then contest winner. Well-deserved, White Wolf! Janice

Joanna Daniel July 8, 2017 at 12:20 AM A lovely romantic sonnet, White Wolf:) congrats on POTD:)

Lisa Ricci July 7, 2017 at 6:38 AM Hello White Wolf. This is exquisite and so very beautiful in its entirety. Everything says poetry. Well done completely and entirely. White Wolf July 7, 2017 at 6:39 AM Ah, there you are, Lisa! Now that I have you, I'll visit your page /|\

Eileen Manassian July 7, 2017 at 4:13 AM OH! What a beautiful romantic write. The genre that moves my soul. I LOVE this. Congrats on POTD. You truly deserve it. BTW...I also love the sonnet form. My favorite. White Wolf July 7, 2017 at 4:17 AM Yes, it is my favourite too! I just wish I could do it justice! Thank you, Eileen /|\

Darren White July 6, 2017 at 2:16 AM Grats on PotD my friend :) So well earned! White Wolf July 7, 2017 at 4:18 AM Coodoolly to you, my friend! /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis July 6, 2017 at 1:11 AM Congratulations my good friend, WW! Well deserved.

Lesly Dsouza July 5, 2017 at 11:04 PM Nice one.

Phil Capitano July 5, 2017 at 9:55 PM You romantic devil you; way to go Wolf on your POTD. Beauty!

Arthur Vaso July 5, 2017 at 8:58 PM Came by to read this again!! :)

Joseph May July 5, 2017 at 8:56 PM Beautifully penned WW...Congrats on POTD

Tim Smith July 5, 2017 at 8:46 PM Congrats Budgie

Arthur Vaso July 5, 2017 at 6:53 PM I very romantic piece White Wolf, congrats on POTD!

Jan Allison July 5, 2017 at 6:08 PM many congrats on POTD budgie:-) hugs jan xx

Akkina Downing July 5, 2017 at 4:00 PM Congratulations on your cute and sweet pots, WW :)

Darlene De Beaulieu July 5, 2017 at 1:17 PM A beautiful written love poem that I have enjoyed reading.This a perfect poem for POtd. My friend.

Chris Green July 5, 2017 at 10:35 AM Absolutely beautiful my friend and the perfect choice of POTD. Congrats on the honor.

Lin Lane July 5, 2017 at 10:20 AM "You are my flower and I am your dawn," I could wake to those words, softly spoken, and eyes alight with love every morning.

Sunlite Wanter July 5, 2017 at 9:34 AM You really know how it's done! Congratulations!

Freddie Robinson Jr. July 5, 2017 at 9:04 AM A romantic gem, WW. Kudos on POTD. Your mastery of the sonnet form is on poetic display. Love always and forever, bruh.

Daniel Turner July 5, 2017 at 8:34 AM Congratulations on POTD WW. I am happy for you. Great write and well deserved:)

Dean Wood July 5, 2017 at 8:07 AM Very nice Wolf! And congratulations on POTD honors. - Dean

Charlie Smith July 5, 2017 at 7:00 AM Lovely work Wolfie, congratulations for POTD honors...

Darren White July 5, 2017 at 6:21 AM Wow Budgie, what a wonderful sonnet this is, so full of love, and romantic. I love it :)

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