Just Look Into My Eyes

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For these moments in time that I'm with you At a loss for words to try and explain I know in my heart that you feel it too For you make my whole world appear so sane We give to each other a warmth so true You are my flower and I am your dawn For I am the grass and you are the dew Whenever I'm with you I feel reborn How do I express what you mean to me Shall I start with a song with melody Shall I paint a picture with imagery Please tell me dear for I need you to see There is no way to make you realize Just trust me, dear, just look into my eyes

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Lenna Walker

Date: 7/11/2017 12:26:00 PM

wow, a sweet write here Rick. Congrats on POTD, well deserved. I am trying to read a lot that I have missed, I just can't seem to catch up ....... enjoyed the read :)

White Wolf
Date: 7/11/2017 12:40:00 PM

Thank you, Lenna! Nice to see you again /|\

Chuck Melugin

Date: 7/9/2017 4:15:00 AM

Wolf....there you go....kicking poetic butt,,,,,as usual and the pic..... wow wow!! here I am....as usual....in admiration.....wearing out the 7's Your student, chuck

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/8/2017 9:05:00 AM

POTD, then contest winner. Well-deserved, White Wolf! Janice

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/8/2017 12:20:00 AM

A lovely romantic sonnet, White Wolf:) congrats on POTD:)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 7/7/2017 6:38:00 AM

Hello White Wolf. This is exquisite and so very beautiful in its entirety. Everything says poetry. Well done completely and entirely.

White Wolf
Date: 7/7/2017 6:39:00 AM

Ah, there you are, Lisa! Now that I have you, I'll visit your page /|\

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/7/2017 4:13:00 AM

OH! What a beautiful romantic write. The genre that moves my soul. I LOVE this. Congrats on POTD. You truly deserve it. BTW...I also love the sonnet form. My favorite.

White Wolf
Date: 7/7/2017 4:17:00 AM

Yes, it is my favourite too! I just wish I could do it justice! Thank you, Eileen /|\