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What's it like to live inside a cloud? A fog so thick it isolates, confounds, and consumes you. There is no up, no down, just fog. A suffocating mist everywhere that makes me wonder, why anyone would choose to live inside a cloud. Clouds cling; they are all-encompassing, binding you to reality and truth. Dreams defend smoke and mirrors to entice you, and yet, love cannot find you in a phantom mist. Call on the winds of fate to blow away the fog and step outside of your dreams. Sometimes you need to get your head out of the clouds, open your eyes, and look around! Leave your phone home, get out and enjoy the sun, find fun and meet real people with real feelings and beating hearts, just like you! (Free Verse) 10/6/2018

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Date: 10/6/2018 11:53:00 AM
Great message, Emile. Well done.
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Date: 10/6/2018 12:03:00 PM
Thanks Line, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/6/2018 10:20:00 AM
Emile, you have penned a very emotional poem that many can relate to, we all go around sometimes in a cloud, not seeing- well done ~
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Date: 10/6/2018 12:04:00 PM
Thanks Constance, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.

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