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Just At the Right Time

JUST AT THE RIGHT TIME Just at the right time You came and rescued me Drying my tears, dissolving my fears Dashing with smile, inviting me to fly Just at the right time You became my eyes and lips Walking to uncertain sharp tips You are brave enough playing the chips Just at the right time You sweetly sing my name Not for fame, not a game This to build then restore me from lame Just at the right time You hold my hand when no one would Courageous enough You boldly stood Embracing me with my ever changing moods Just at the right time All hues span something unique and special A kind, written by the whole wide celestial Yes! yes, just at the right time.. (c)Olive Eloisa 10:48pm September 14, 2014

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Date: 9/21/2014 6:07:00 AM
I love this poem Olive_eloi! Finding support when it is needed means a lot to us. Divine help is always available, but there are moments when a word of encouragement from true friends can also make the difference. Have a blessed Sunday. hugs // paul
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Date: 10/27/2014 6:46:00 AM
true Paul.. thanks for being my friend
Date: 9/17/2014 11:07:00 AM
So well done Olive. A very touching poem.
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Date: 10/27/2014 6:45:00 AM
thanks much Brenda..
Date: 9/16/2014 3:50:00 PM
Sometimes in life, someone or something comes along at the right time. Delightful read Olive, and your already in my favourites, James :)
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Date: 10/27/2014 6:44:00 AM
thanks much James. :) and you are too
Date: 9/14/2014 11:05:00 PM
this is so sweet, Olive. How are you today? Was this poem for a challenge. You did a great job with it.
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Date: 10/27/2014 6:43:00 AM
no this poem not for challenge Andie.. just i want to write..
Date: 9/14/2014 2:07:00 PM
I so love this Olive...a fav for me....hugs Tim
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Date: 9/15/2014 1:37:00 AM
thank you so much Tim my friend.. :) hugs and hugs..
Date: 9/14/2014 1:17:00 PM
I am adding a lot of my fav poets to my list today. i just added you.
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Date: 9/15/2014 1:36:00 AM
thank you.. :)
Date: 9/14/2014 1:15:00 PM
just so darn beautiful.
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Date: 9/15/2014 1:35:00 AM
thanks much Maurice for the comment and more for adding me as one of your faves.. :) im honored.. :)

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