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Just Another Love Poem

I have no room for anyone but you I can't see anyone but you I can't hear anyone but you I can't taste anyone but you..... Why , oh God, why.... I didn't plan it. I didn't want it But here it is..in all its glory.. It calls to me ..love calls to me. Tomorrow is another day. It will be the same... Alone, wanting, grieving,. hoping Yet, still alone...so alone.. Ice on a pond...Sparkling.. Picture of tears that I shed... Is there beauty in pain? The artist thinks it is so.....

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John Loving Iii

Date: 3/13/2010 1:59:00 PM

we have found ourselves on the same boat. i'm having these feelings to. and this piece haunts me. what is this thing/ it feels like a period of something ready to give birth. so mind racking at times but you can't give up hope or escape. were traped for now. yours john going to my faves

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/12/2010 5:42:00 AM

sounds so full of grief, very beautiful

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/11/2010 7:37:00 PM

Artists often make "beauty" born of pain, Barbara. And you have succeeded in doing just that here. We think only teens can believe they can't live without a special person, but it's often true for all of us. Excellent poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn