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Kitten, Illustration, Vector, Drawing, Animals, Cute

I was dreaming that I was running fast all around, feral, wild, untamed- and I ran like a hunting hound. Then, I felt changes in my bed and a sound, so, I lifted my head from my soft grey mound. And crawled on the bed and with my mom clowned, she was sleeping ~ so I prowled my play mice 'round. On my mom's lips and nose kisses I have drowned, well, at least for me she is my mother crowned. I see her eyes flutter ... she stirs and I bound, MEOW! Are you going to sleep all day I frowned. So into her ear I make a loud purr sound, I am forced to stand on her chest and pound. Get up and make tea ... my arms hold her 'round , Then, she hugs me close and kisses me all around. Mom walks towards the kitchen- so I leap and bound, I zoom past sliding on the wood floor to astound. After breakfast I go to my tattered scratching post round, the living room of our home has become my playground. I run southbound and then 'round and 'round and 'round, sorry about the vase I meow- I was messing around. _____________________ April 10, 2022 Poetry/Nursery Rhyme/Just a Round Cat Copyright Protected, ID 04-1449-758-10 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Nursery Rhyme 3 sponsor, Eve Roper, Judged 05/02/2022 First Place

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Date: 5/5/2022 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your nursery rhyme win. What a creative write/picture. Love It. Have a blessed day............
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Constance La France
Date: 5/6/2022 11:52:00 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 5/5/2022 7:07:00 AM
"Zoom past sliding" every reader sees that action. Congrats! Congrats! Congrats!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/5/2022 9:32:00 AM
Barbara, thank you so much for the comment and the congrats, zoooom ~Constance
Date: 5/3/2022 4:08:00 AM
Very interesting. Full of beautiful sound. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/4/2022 1:09:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, lots of very loud purring at night and kissing blessings~Constance
Date: 5/2/2022 8:49:00 PM
I love this! Hugging this write and the kitty over there. Congratulations on your beautiful nursery rhyme and win my dear friend, Constance! Thanks a lot for sharing! God bless! Hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 5/2/2022 8:55:00 PM
Len, thank you so much for the compliment and the congratulations, this is based on my kitty Snuggles, blessings ~Constance
Date: 5/2/2022 7:03:00 PM
Great story, Constance, congratulations on your 1st place win. Blessing
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Constance La France
Date: 5/2/2022 8:56:00 PM
Eve, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest and my great placement and the compliment and compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 4/22/2022 4:13:00 PM
So adorable, Constance. I liked this nursery rhyme challenge. I did mine on a dog, but did not post it yet.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/22/2022 4:40:00 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment, look forward to reading your dog poem ~Constance
Date: 4/20/2022 9:52:00 AM
Dear Constance - Hi. How adroable is this entry. Very. Cats are beautiful and enjoyable with a lot of personality. Your entry brings a smile and yes a chuckle to the reader. Best of luck with the contest. Blessings to the little babies and their owners. Have a wonderful day. Keep enjoying poetrysoup.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/20/2022 1:23:00 PM
Lisa, thank you so much for the wonderful comment and compliment, I based this poem on my own grey kitty Snuggles, she makes me smile and laugh every single day, such a character, blessing ~Constance
Date: 4/19/2022 10:12:00 AM
Hello Constance, Oh I smiled while reading this poem. so cute. Love & Friendship Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/19/2022 3:33:00 PM
Hello Constance, i like this poem a lot. it is cute. Love & Friendship Darlene
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Constance La France
Date: 4/19/2022 3:06:00 PM
Darlene, hello and thank you so much for the visit and the smile, and compliment, blessings ~Constance

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