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for the contest sponsored by Andrea Dietrich. 
thank you soupers for your support. Hopefully ill get back here to read again soon.
Sending you all light 

time stirs incensed sparks a moon of juniper dreams amidst this wild heart aching to be cloaked in pine ~ sweet love  … brushed in warm lilac

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Date: 7/1/2025 7:28:00 AM
Hi Inky. What beauty expressed in your ink. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 6/29/2025 12:01:00 PM
IE, there is a very pleasant aroma around these words. You have a magical way of transforming words into something very pleasant for the rest of us. I hope you are well and am sending you smiles. Thanks for doing what you do for all of us!!
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Date: 6/27/2025 7:20:00 PM
"Aching to be cloaked in pine" is a gorgeous line, as are each of your lines somehow. Beautiful and transcendental.
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Date: 6/26/2025 9:28:00 PM
"Incensed sparks, juniper dreams, cloaked in pine, brushed in warm lilac''- choicest use of words and images! The feel of love here is at once soothing and wild. Congratulations sweet friend on your top win.
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Date: 6/26/2025 8:49:00 PM
I love all the rich images in this beautiful tanka! This is a fave. Congratulations on your win. Blessings.
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Date: 6/26/2025 10:37:00 AM
Lovely write, Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/26/2025 7:34:00 AM
Another beautiful piece of writing, congratulations
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Date: 6/26/2025 7:19:00 AM
Congrats! ..cloaked in pine! Beautiful!
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Date: 6/25/2025 6:59:00 AM
Dear Inky,This is so beautifully fragrant and tender — it reads like a whispered moment in nature’s embrace. The imagery is both wild and gentle, like love blooming softly under a twilight sky. Just lovely. Hope you feel better soon...Hugs
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Date: 6/24/2025 9:28:00 PM
‘ sweet love … brushed in warm lilac’… absolutely beautiful!!!
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Date: 6/24/2025 6:22:00 PM
Gorgeous. "aching to be cloaked in pine ~ sweet love"
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Beej Simrov
Date: 6/27/2025 7:22:00 PM
Omg I also thought "gorgeous" when reading that...reading on wavelengths...
Date: 6/24/2025 4:38:00 PM
beautifully penned Ink, a unique take on the jumper theme, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/24/2025 1:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "juniper" is a wonderful write. I enjoyed reading it. Have a blessed day with your win.........
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Date: 6/24/2025 1:18:00 PM
So gorgeous, Ink. Clever of you to use Juniper as a scent and a symbol of romance. Congrats in my contest
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Beej Simrov
Date: 6/27/2025 7:23:00 PM
Gorgeous is a spot-on word for this poem
Date: 6/24/2025 9:42:00 AM
My gosh, your poetry never ceases to surprise me in the most magical and enchanting way, my dear Ink! You just have a flawless way with words as if, the elixir of words flows in your veins! I'm absolutely astounded always, while reading your uniquely knitted phraseology and all the beauty wordsmithery that you do to infuse life in those surreal imageries! "time stirs incensed sparks" made me skip a breath because of its poetic cadence! "moon of juniper dreams" "brushed in warm lilac" wow!! I wish somebody can weave me a blanket of that last line, haha, it's just so soothing and comforting! This tanka is surely going into my FAVs ~best wishes to you in the contest, sending love and light!!
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Date: 6/24/2025 7:30:00 AM
Oh wow, this is exquisite piece of writing, dear poetess. Beautifully penned! :) <3 I'm so glad you are back <3
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Date: 6/24/2025 4:09:00 AM
time stirs incensed sparks a moon of juniper dreams… ooo that line !!!! wild heart aching to be cloaked in pine mmm being coated in pine is gorgeous … what gorgeous flow papi..: brushed in warm lilac.. absolutely stunning!!!!
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Date: 6/24/2025 3:29:00 AM
A moon of juniper dreams… love it
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