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June-14-2025
High Fives For June Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich

 

with the monsoon rains, a green June bug came whirring, to our living room~ my smart cat after playing, gulped down this hapless victim.

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Date: 7/1/2025 7:30:00 AM
They just don't learn that you're' not supposed to play with your food. LOL Cuteness Valsa. You truly captured the fun. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 6/26/2025 7:36:00 AM
A fun tanka, congratulations
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Date: 6/26/2025 5:53:00 AM
This tanka somehow made me smile as i can imagine the cat gulping down the victim! You are so versatile and you can write any form and on any subject just seamlessly! Hope your fever goes away too. Iv been unwell too. Theres a bad viral going around and my migraines been so bad i havent been able to read much on here too, get well soon. Congratulations on your top win . Sending you light
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Date: 6/24/2025 7:05:00 PM
Poor bug... But then again, I usually let my dogs to the same, haha Congrats!
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Date: 6/24/2025 1:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun write. The cat is having way toooooo much fun in the picture. Have a blessed day with your win............
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Date: 6/24/2025 1:19:00 PM
Seeing your picture, I find this poem even more enjoyable. Thanks for entering and big Congrats
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/25/2025 9:03:00 AM
get better soon
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Valsa George
Date: 6/25/2025 8:53:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear Andrea for the high placement given for my poem. As I am down with severe fever, I will be on the site after I feel better.
Date: 6/14/2025 7:49:00 AM
Yep, I love them...though they are forever hunters. Poor June Bug...fooled by playful kitties, forgotten they grow up to be cats.
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Date: 6/14/2025 7:00:00 AM
monsoon doomed! The cat plays with his treat…
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