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July Kiss

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7/7/23 - Written for the contest: A July Etheree Contest, Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich.

Kiss, our first, in July. Holding your hand, as your lips brushed mine. Loud fireworks exploding, as my lips kiss yours again. A crowd's gathered watching the show. We escape and hide behind a tree, watching fireworks while we kindle our own!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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The Situation
Date: 8/23/2023 6:47:00 PM
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reminds me of what I miss.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 8/24/2023 3:34:00 AM
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Thank you.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/2/2023 7:21:00 AM
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Sweet and cute - great combination Tania. Congratulations!:)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/29/2023 12:19:00 PM
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Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/30/2023 12:22:00 PM
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Sara, thank you.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/29/2023 12:26:00 AM
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Very romantic as well as love-filled. Congratulations!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/29/2023 4:55:00 AM
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Christuraj, thank you.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 7/28/2023 5:25:00 PM
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Dear Tania, a beautifully romantic July etheree! I adore the fireworks imagery both in the sky and behind the tree. A great last line for a grand finale! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Andrea’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/28/2023 6:52:00 PM
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Susan, thank you and thanks for your visit.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/28/2023 3:09:00 PM
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Fireworks and kisses - what could be more romantic? Congrats on your win, Tania! Blessings, Kim M
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/28/2023 6:52:00 PM
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Kim, thank you.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/28/2023 10:42:00 AM
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Great romantic write mixing it together with fireworks. Congrats
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/28/2023 1:03:00 PM
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Andrea, thank you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2023 7:22:00 PM
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Congratulations, Tania!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/28/2023 4:14:00 AM
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Kim, thank you.
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John Watt
Date: 7/16/2023 10:25:00 PM
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Lovely and romantic, Tania. Kindles sweet memories of that first kiss. Loved the fireworks imagery and double meaning ~ John
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/17/2023 3:45:00 AM
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John, thank you.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/10/2023 2:49:00 AM
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Ahh!! Fireworks going in two bangs. Sara
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/10/2023 3:43:00 AM
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Sara, thank you.
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Bill Baker
Date: 7/8/2023 2:07:00 PM
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Sweet romance, on the fourth of July! I liked it, Tania. Good luck in the contest! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/8/2023 2:43:00 PM
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Bill, thank you.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 7/7/2023 8:52:00 PM
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What romance, Tania. Wonder about August when the temperatures will soar. Hugs.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/8/2023 4:51:00 AM
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Victor, thank you, hugs.
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David Fisher
Date: 7/7/2023 5:16:00 PM
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Holy lovebird smokes! This is what summer's all about.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/7/2023 7:26:00 PM
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David, thank you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2023 4:52:00 PM
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I love this! Especially the double kiss and hiding behind the tree. Very romantic, Tania!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/7/2023 5:05:00 PM
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Kim, thank you.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/7/2023 4:14:00 PM
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Quite an exciting July 4th for you, hope there were many more~
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/7/2023 5:05:00 PM
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Michelle, thank you.
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/7/2023 2:07:00 PM
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whoa... Tania. I love the path you took on this July Etheree. Hugs for such a great entry.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/7/2023 5:06:00 PM
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Lin, thank you, hugs.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2023 1:56:00 PM
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OMG Tania this one is explosive on so many levels I LOVE it and hope its a true story!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/7/2023 5:06:00 PM
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Jan, thank you, hugs.

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