Journey To Here

While everything’s still out of synch,
A long flight gives one time to think.
To take a step back from the brink,
Commit the journey’s thoughts to ink.
To muse a little more...

A final skip across the pond,
Returning from the great beyond.
The distance makes the heart grow fond;
I’d gladly upgrade for the wand
That whisks me to my door.

And though I’d make the trip again,
Seems like forever since I’ve been
In Lacey’s Spring, right ‘round the bend
With Frances and my daughter Gwen,
The grandkids I adore.

I think I’ll stay at home a while,
Embrace the gravel with a smile,
Take Missy for a wooded mile,
Find tasks as joys and not as trials,
Let God show what’s in store.

You cannot go, ‘cuz you’re still here;
You cannot leave what you hold dear,
And if at first, that seems unclear,
When it resolves, then you’ve come near
To wisdom at its core.

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Third Place Winner for the "Form J - Just Write Me a New Poem" Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France written 03/91/2022
I classified this as a tail-rhyme, since it is aaaaf, bbbbf, ccccf, ddddf, eeeef. It is also a quintain, but since the tail is a shorter meter, it seemed be better characterized by that description.
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Dietrich Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 4:58 PM
Belated congrats on the great win too.
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April 10, 2022 at 4:57 PM
Oh this one I really really like!! And it's very consistent rhyming pattern. I take it the stanza could be either aab/ aaab/ oR aaaab for first one. Hope you will comment to me if I got that wrong!
Kyser Avatar
April 10, 2022 at 5:14 PM
No, that's correct - you're on it :-)
La France Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 6:58 PM
Jeff, congratulations on your win in my Just Write Me A Poem contest, wonderful ~Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 10:22 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.......................
Alex Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 10:07 PM
"Commit the journey’s thoughts to ink" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 7:45 PM
This is complicated, intricate, and so well done, Jeff. I don't think I've ever tried this.
Kyser Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 7:55 PM
Thanks, Milt, the tail rhyme is kind of fun to work with. I’ve used it on a few others, including Son of Amittai, but those stanzas just had 3 lines.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 7:29 PM
This is so pretty - especially this part "I think I’ll stay at home a while, Embrace the gravel with a smile, Take Missy for a wooded mile, Find tasks as joys and not as trials, Let God show what’s in store."
Kyser Avatar
March 19, 2022 at 7:34 PM
Thank you, Caren.
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