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Journey of Joy---Tails

. . .... . . when broken memory drowned under chrome of new moon, revered rune fed her hungry joy… cheer nodded on porch door; oh, ounce of hope poured word of good omen… . . . groom gone, mocked by wounded run from enemy bomb, red hydrogen on deep ground: journey of gunpowder fog , ebony… mercy, mercy! he roughed on, he moved on bore robbed order… beyond doggone echo, honored cup of God reborn one more eve… now , bound for home. (a) peaceful tidings to all soldiers who were re-united with their families this holiday season . . . . .. Nikko’s HEADS OR TAILS Contest By nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/1/2012 8:27:00 PM
CONGRATS! I knew you'd make it far, this was just too good :D Love, J.
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Date: 1/31/2012 10:51:00 PM
You amazed me with your poetic prowess Nette. Congratulations on your win! I struggled doing my piece but I made it alright. Love Dalila
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Date: 1/31/2012 7:53:00 PM
Nette-This is brilliant! Many congrats. to you :)
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Date: 1/31/2012 3:07:00 PM
Congratulations, Nette, on your win! Luv, Maureen
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Date: 1/31/2012 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win today in "Nikko's" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2012 11:17:00 AM
Nette, you did a wonderf ul job on this one, congratulations on your fantastic win, Greg
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Date: 1/31/2012 11:06:00 AM
A big hoorrayyy for u Nette.See below I told you it is a chart topper.
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Date: 1/31/2012 10:57:00 AM
This was another poem that wowed me, nette! Awesome how you still brought on your talent for imagery in this very touching write! and I loved how you ended this, very memorable! And hmm about your prize, haha, how's that?? I had Philippine coins in mind lol....It's either you pass on your prize OR I will see what other token I can think of ;) super duper congrats to you! :D
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Date: 1/31/2012 10:38:00 AM
Good one like it congratulations Nette x
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Date: 1/13/2012 6:55:00 PM
Great poem, Nette! You're amazing! Good luck in the contest as well :) Thanks for your help <3 Love, J.
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Date: 1/10/2012 7:01:00 AM
I don't know how you did this. You make it look so simple! was it? good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 1/10/2012 2:29:00 AM
Great job...I struggled writing for this one. But it was fun. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/9/2012 6:13:00 PM
wow! left me speechless, good luck on the contest nette, a winner for me. and just want to wish you a happy birthday (sorry a bit belated). all the best wishes hun :)
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Date: 1/9/2012 1:59:00 PM
I think you have posted a well crafted write here Nette,, and i see there were letters you could not use..) all the best..
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Date: 1/9/2012 11:38:00 AM
Fantastic write Nette, I really enjoyed reading it this afternoon! You completed this poem masterfully, I am impressed of your avoidance of the "forbidden" letters! You wrote an awesome poem with your allowed letters, I really like it!! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/9/2012 11:06:00 AM
WOWSER! I smell gold, here, Nette! Loved this tribute . This is so sophisticated, the weaving of rhyme (memory/ebony/journey and chrome/home) poignant and deep. Sure to do well. HAPPY BIRTHDAY. PS... SOUP MAIL, DEAR!
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Date: 1/9/2012 6:38:00 AM
Revisiting this one.... A chart topper:)
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Date: 1/9/2012 5:10:00 AM
To the most beautiful girl on the Soup this glorious B_ I_R_T_H_D_A_Y_! Please visit my poems to find a birthday treat just for you. Gwendolen
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Date: 1/9/2012 3:06:00 AM
An amazing write here.As you have written TAILS.Title should have the word TAILS at the end.Soupmail.
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Date: 1/9/2012 3:03:00 AM
Yes...I am first here.........
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