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3rd Placement

Joseph May sponsored

Double double words to bubble 2 contest

Written 30/06/2024

 

Joe Biden Don Trump

Jokers galore as two men pretenD
old, demented both, but greedy too
eyeing leadership of the nation

Both unfit! yet are in this gambiT
insight they lack, no wisdom so far
Doomed is US! to world  peace bid adieu
Each is out there to do us all harm
No to them both! need good young new crop!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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May Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 5:53 AM
Many want Biden out, but he won't go, Very nicely penned Krish, Congrats on your win
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 5:56 AM
Thanks Joseph May!:)
Jones Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 1:37 PM
Wow this is really clever! And hard hitting truths make it powerful! Cool and good luck in the contest.
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 1:46 PM
Thanks Karen! Great to see your lovely words here! Thank you my friend!!:)
Anaya Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 9:15 AM
Govenor Gavin Newson is best for the job, let's pray Biden passes the baton to him. I'm sure he'll run next time, remember his name. :)
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 9:34 AM
I shall look that up! Good to know, there is still hope!
Lane Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 4:24 AM
The mumbler vs the bumbler. They were both disparaging choices to lead a country for four years. Trying to conceive another four from either is incomprehensible.
Lane Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 4:51 AM
Thank you for the nice comment about my poem titles, Krish. I've become averse to those who say they wish to help any country but lead from the need for greed. I will be apolitical, thus having no right to complain. Who really leads any nation anyway? Not we the people who vote for the lesser of two evils.
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 4:40 AM
Thanks Lin! True! love your titles!! Time for US to worry that they cannot find a young good person to lead!!
Allison Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 1:47 AM
I applaud you for writing this Krish - and totally agree they need new young blood not 2 old men. so glad i don't live in the USA and have these 2 old codgers to choose from. hugs jan xx
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 3:10 AM
Thanks Jan!! US needs some great people to give it a new direction! These two are disasters! irrespective of which of these come to power, US is going to slip further down!
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