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Jewel Tones

Amber evening skies Shoreline wears a gilded face A sun slips away

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Caryl Muzzey

Date: 3/10/2010 8:55:00 AM

A beautifulful Haiku, congratulations on placing in the contest. Caryl

James Fraser

Date: 2/28/2010 4:35:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku Carrie >> James

Susan Palli

Date: 2/27/2010 6:35:00 AM

Loved it

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2010 1:10:00 PM

well, how did I miss this one. It's a sparkling gem of beauty!! And yes, it IS fun being ME, despite the few problems I have in life!! LUv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/17/2010 5:18:00 PM

congrats on the win, very beautiful!!

Amy Thompson

Date: 2/17/2010 2:47:00 PM

Dear Carrie, thank you for the warm welcome to Poetry Soup. I’m pleasantly surprised by all the talent I see here. I love your Haikus, and want to try to learn how to write them better. These are beautiful, and you can draw an image in a few words which is difficult for me. Brevity is not a virtue of mine. I still have trouble finding my way around, so I hope that my comments reach the right person. Thank you so much for your kind words about my poems. Love, Amy.

Amy Thompson

Date: 2/17/2010 9:16:00 AM

Dear Carrie, my friend Andrea advised me to read the Haikus which are so good. I have a difficult time writing them because it’s hard for me to draw a picture in a few words. But you and Karen are masters at it. From reading your Haikus, I’m beginning to realize how beautiful a Haiku can be, and your haikus encourage me to try to write a few myself. Very, very lovely! Love, Amy.

Brian Strand

Date: 2/17/2010 1:08:00 AM

Congrats Carrie on your success.Rgds Brian

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/16/2010 3:14:00 PM

cool and poetic as all get out, Carrie! Nice Congratulations!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/16/2010 5:38:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie, on your success in Raul’s “Seascapes” poetry contest with this creative haiku. Your words ooze with beautiful imagery. Your poem is outstanding. Keep the winning words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/16/2010 5:36:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie, on your success in Raul’s “Seascapes” poetry contest with this creative haiku. Your poem is outstanding. Keep the winning words flowing! Smiles, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/16/2010 5:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Seascape contest Carrie. Love,Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/15/2010 8:07:00 PM

Aah! This is beautiful, Carrie! My congratulations on your win in Raul's "Seascapes" Contest and thanks for your always warm and encouraging comments on my peoms! Peace, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/15/2010 3:13:00 PM

Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for a wonderful write.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/15/2010 2:20:00 PM

Carrie, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Mike Butler

Date: 2/15/2010 10:12:00 AM

This is a great entry for the contest! Good luck! Beautiful Haiku. -Mike

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/15/2010 9:30:00 AM

Great imagery, Carrie! I think I went way out there with mine! LOL Thanks for your kind comments, though! Peace,love, Audrey

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/15/2010 9:26:00 AM

Great descriptive Haiku that should be in the winner's circle. Good luck in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my write. Sara