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Jerusalem, the Jugular - Part Three

I carried on to butcher with precision and pride for 5 hours saving the lives of a Centurion and 6 other Brothers, and rescued the Standard of Legio V Macedonica from being burned, I actually sealed my chin wound with the hot metal of the Standard, for these acts of valor I was awarded the Corona Civica, and a lifetime of " Night Terrors ", sometimes I think I died in the ruins of Jerusalem, sometimes I feel like I'm still there, fighting for the taste of honor or for the " smell of blood " many of the captured Jews were used as slave labor to construct the Collosium, we made a death sport arena of Jeruselum, but there were no spectators cheering no audience to applaud the agony of two cultures in a death match, maybe we are all meant to be gladiators, fighting to make noble graves and pyres - J.A.B. These three poems, intended to be one composition, have been entered into the Roman Legion Contest to honor Ancient Rome and the Poet who sponsered this historic subject matter.

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Date: 8/9/2014 4:34:00 AM
Read all three before I commented. You hold all man's actions up to the light Justin and say look, see, feel this..and I look to see if you give an answer in your work..and all I see are more questions mirrored in history. I love that..the fact that you leave it to the reader to look within themselves for the answer..no not ask..insist. Your work slaps us out of apathy and into the arena. Well done
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Justin Bordner
Date: 8/9/2014 1:12:00 PM
Your response to this Roman compostion is a remarakable reward for my efforts Craig. I desire to raise the reader's awareness of how they view and define their beliefs, education, and actions. To create visceral Art, spiritual Light through the inspiration of Providence, Nature, Love and in History is always the objective. Thank you Craig. Thank Deity for Rome. J.A.B.
Date: 8/3/2014 8:49:00 PM
Well done Justin... All enjoyed.... Verlena
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Justin Bordner
Date: 8/5/2014 3:58:00 AM
It means so very much to me that you read and commented all three parts of this composition Verlena! Thank you, and thank Deity for Ancient Rome! J.A.B.
Date: 7/17/2014 11:01:00 PM
You have done a great job with these three poems. I wish you all the luck in the contest. Many blessings always... Lucilla
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/20/2014 1:22:00 AM
It means so much to me to have a seasoned poetess read all three pieces of this composition Lucilla. You are looking very healthy and pretty, and your work has never been stronger. J.A.B.
Date: 7/17/2014 4:12:00 PM
good work. take out the maybe be sure about what you write when you write it! a confidant writer helps readers envision the same picture you want to present.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/20/2014 1:18:00 AM
I'm a typo monster with my smart phone...LOL...J.A.B.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/20/2014 1:17:00 AM
Abdolutely right Karl! I trust in what I know, and respect what I feel. I brlieve in ehat I need to communicaye, and I'm alwsys grateful to Providence along with Divine Inspiration. I appreciate your experienced insight. J.A.B.
Date: 7/9/2014 9:01:00 AM
Bravo! You should be proud of this piece. I can't imagine this not being at the top of the winners list.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/10/2014 12:46:00 PM
I receive strength and honor from your praise Richard. Thank you so much for reading he entire poem my friend. J.A.B.
Date: 7/1/2014 5:57:00 PM
Incredible piece, Justin. You've amazing insight and passion laced with the spirit of honor and valor...thanks for taking me back these past couple of days. Always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/1/2014 6:08:00 PM
Anytime Laura!I'm very honored that you see this Art as being multidimensional in it's historic, military, human, and spiritual elements, that is very important to me. J.A.B.
Date: 6/30/2014 12:11:00 PM
epic!... a deep, solid write, justin... this is gold.. huggs
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/1/2014 2:39:00 AM
Thank you Nette, thats how I feel about Ancient Rome! J.A.B.
Date: 6/29/2014 1:11:00 PM
Grand finale! Questions that are left for one to ponder on. Great questions, Justin. Sometimes we lose sight of what the fight is all about. I know...world views are sometimes so skewed depending on where you were born. A better day is coming...so, I believe. A better world. I know it's true. I just wonder if I'll be there.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 7/1/2014 2:29:00 AM
Sometimes its best to love things simply, including ourselves Eileen. J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/29/2014 1:36:00 PM
Bless you, my dear. It's hard sometimes. Things get me down. I will try to be a positive influence. I believe I achieve that with my students. I was just told that my name is one of the few most mentioned as a favorite teacher here at the university, so I try...to share loftier dreams and goals, but one can only do so much...especially when there is inner turmoil. Thanks for the thoughts.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 6/29/2014 1:29:00 PM
You're already there Eileen, because your are a vital force in making this world stronger and more beautiful right now! Be the angel you were born to be Eileen. Thank you so much for reading and respecting the entire composition Eileen, and for sharing your intelligent soul, you're awesome! J.A.B.

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