JEALOUSY

~It's Out There~

Green colored field 
A flower without the sun 
Wilts from distrust 
now washed away 
by the man storm

~*~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/30/2018 10:41:00 AM
Very short but nice like always, What happed,  Was this a day you do not feel like writing? im a kidder so don't rush to any conclusions? What does it feel like when you see a number like 30000 It must be an amazing feeling  Not because you are so great,  But because you have people enjoying your poetry  you are sharing of yourself Also, do you read that many comments  Does  It takes all day See yah https://plus.google.com/u/0/+marcacrich
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Date: 6/28/2016 12:49:00 PM
Nice choice of words..:)
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Date: 4/13/2016 2:34:00 AM
Very amazing write.....hugs
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Date: 4/11/2016 4:52:00 PM
Epic selection of words.
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Date: 4/3/2016 4:21:00 AM
:) I desire this one. Envy is what I can relate to here and there. Such an epic piece this one is. A well-deserved 7!
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Date: 3/14/2016 3:17:00 AM
i loved this poem i think you described jealously really well, good job!
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Date: 3/3/2016 8:02:00 PM
Makes me think. Thx
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Date: 3/3/2016 8:00:00 PM
Makes me think.. Thx
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Date: 1/28/2016 5:09:00 PM
Hi Linda, Jealousy, the great green destroyer that moves unseen and then strikes. Your Tanka, excellent as always, well thought out. Short, to the point, a seven from me Linda. May your pen ever run gold. You have painted jealousy so well on your canvas Linda. Love....Vlad. A seven for your Tanka Linda.
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Date: 12/30/2015 6:34:00 PM
I love your Tanka. And what a comparison. Fabulous job. I love the way you write from life. And speak for so many through your poems. That's what we're supposed to do. Right? xoxo
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Date: 9/26/2015 1:40:00 PM
The personification and correlation of the "man storm" was so perfect!
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Date: 9/16/2015 10:29:00 PM
Dear Linda Sometimes short and sweet, can say more than long in length, love the meaning and sweet power of this work, cheri
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Date: 7/2/2015 4:01:00 AM
Hello PD (Linda) . . . How true and very well-said with this Tanka. Excellent!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 6/13/2015 11:30:00 PM
I remember this one - a very strong poem.
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Date: 5/28/2015 11:47:00 AM
Clever TANKA PD ! excellent language and technicolor imagery. Well done indeed! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 5/28/2015 10:04:00 AM
Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!
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Date: 5/28/2015 4:51:00 AM
Too descriptive!
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Date: 5/22/2015 1:19:00 PM
I love the poem. I like the way you have expressed jealousy, but you have this categorized as Tanka and isn't Tanka 5-7-5-7-7 syllables? And this poem is 5-6-4-5-4.
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Date: 5/14/2015 1:49:00 PM
Awesomeness in words, and brevity... Great Job, Tanya
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Date: 5/6/2015 3:23:00 AM
Green fields of envy.. Sun setting on beauty.. Life suffocated by doubt.. Much truth in simplicity! Linda.. How deep you go in five short lines.. Awesome!
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Date: 5/1/2015 3:29:00 PM
Jealousy, quite a word like others in humans time, but so captured PD, James :) :)
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Date: 4/27/2015 9:48:00 PM
Every now and then jealousy finds us and it is one of the hardest feelings to get rid of... You've said so much here in just a few short lines. Very creative and emotive work, PD.
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Date: 4/27/2015 2:19:00 PM
When we feel alone and abandoned in life emotions become extreme and jealousy may rear its ugly head. Your words have described this feeling well. Emile. #7
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Date: 4/26/2015 8:36:00 AM
This is quite profound in it's simplicity.
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Date: 4/25/2015 2:04:00 PM
great words written linda, this piece actually made me think that all emotions are eternal and are naturally in every human. it all depends how we perceive and make use of it. thanks, for visiting my poems again and for your encouraging words. love , aneesha .
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