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Jazz Man

JAZZ MAN Lips of sweat, Igniting catalyst tune as they burn, Crossed eyes, attention spreads feeling the whiteness in the pure magic Each memo confronts the other, Soul cord of depth, and for one short-lived moment. Losing sight of reality in a stasis of oasis. The passionate barb sticks note directly into the atmosphere Each message is a flood of scheme, singing the blues, this smooth criminal angel of birth, in your hands luring you to a road in heaven. The lights are all you feel; you can see the forgotten masterpiece. Bathing in it, as the drums go on, the mob gathers, to feel the whiteness of the trumpet. He is rotating his saxophone, making love to the crowd. His horn comes with words that deepen the soul, the crowd is mesmerized. He extends his hands, A standing ovation, Slamming and whistling, Louder than thunder, Mr. Jazz man is done With no condom at all………………………. by;

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Date: 6/11/2015 4:02:00 PM
Sweet, Congratulations........ Craig's aka SEAN gots great taste
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Date: 6/11/2015 7:47:00 AM
I can see why this one was chosen, luv it! Congratulations Linda.
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Date: 6/10/2015 11:27:00 PM
Making lurve to the crowd. You caught the mood perfectly, PD. Congrats on your win. Viv x
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Date: 6/10/2015 2:25:00 PM
congratulations PD on your win with this fine concert contest write
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Date: 6/10/2015 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win, Linda! Your poem was so full of imagery that I felt I was right there! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/10/2015 1:46:00 PM
such fabulous imagery Linda I too love jazz and blues - can see why Craig loved this vivid descriptive write congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/8/2015 3:02:00 PM
Thank you for your warm greeting. You are quite charming for a destroyer of poets. ha I think you must be a destroyer of blues and boredom instead. Nice meeting you!
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Date: 3/28/2015 3:36:00 PM
Being a jazz lover and musician, I get this completely, great write...And luckily we're all on the pill, otherwise, jazz babies all around lol
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Date: 11/20/2013 1:55:00 AM
Hi my dearest sis! How are u? Hope you're doing well. Mind me, quite tired @ school but I need to smile then send it to u with my biggest & sweetest hugs:)))Taking my short break now then go home after 3 hrs. I'm stopping by to send u SOUPMAIL. Ok, bye for now, talk to u again later. lovem4evr, Leo
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Date: 10/31/2013 2:54:00 AM
Wow! Lack words but love d ending part "with no condom at all" Kudos! Bob- Based On Belief
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Date: 9/27/2013 5:06:00 PM
Being a musician this really appeals to me. You did a great job of describing the live performance. Nothing feels better than that interaction between the crowd and the performer. Condom not required.....Sweet! ~Kilmer
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Date: 9/21/2013 11:06:00 PM
Hi, my evrdearest sis! I see you on line. Sending you biggest sweet hugs right away with warm smiles. Hope you're doing well. Mind me, I'm going around the soup while doing multi-task @ home: laundry, cleaning, cooking etc. ;))). Hope you've a great wkend with you & your family. God bless! You're in my thoughts & pray'rs! love m4evr, Leonora
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Date: 9/17/2013 3:11:00 PM
...angel of birth, in your hands... must go back to Jazz 105 and pay attention!
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Date: 5/30/2013 4:51:00 AM
Very jazzy poem...Cool last line...Now what did I do with my...Aha!...In my wallet of course! (I hate these damn things)
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Date: 5/30/2013 5:00:00 AM
Couldn't resist...The farmer's daughter lured 2 helpers into the hay loft "Yeah, you can, but you have to put rubbers on so I won't get pregnant'...A week later one helper said to the other...I don't care if she gets pregnant! I'm takin mine off it's itching like hell' (Sorry)
Date: 5/28/2013 11:55:00 AM
Hi! my friend, everything passed by the last line. Great congrats on your superb win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/28/2013 9:32:00 AM
Excellent Quill and very Heartfelt. I'm faving this one. Congrats on your well deserved win. I love deep work. Well done Mistress. AO
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Date: 5/28/2013 2:48:00 AM
Congratulations on winning this contest, PD. Reading this one has a lively atmosphere like I enjoyed hearing the trendy music. Thank you also for my win in your contest. Appreciate it so much. (^_^) Noel
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Date: 5/27/2013 7:22:00 PM
Thank you for my win G... xox
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Date: 5/27/2013 5:53:00 PM
Hi PD, congratulations my dearest friend, I am so happy for you, I loved loved reading your poem. Whoa amazing. Love Terry xoxo a 7>>>>a Fave.
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Date: 5/27/2013 5:08:00 PM
Congrats on this worthy win! Fantastic. Love the end! :) thank you for the feedback on Jitters as well :)
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Date: 5/27/2013 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations!!! Super awesome job :)
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Date: 5/27/2013 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your grand win friend PD...its a WOW for me!!! hugs, maria :)
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Date: 5/27/2013 4:48:00 AM
Hi Pd congratulations on your top spot love xx
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Date: 5/26/2013 7:35:00 PM
Raz ma taz and congraz to you!!
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Date: 5/26/2013 6:59:00 PM
Congrats Linda: This really is a true jazzy poem. Well done PD SuZ
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