Jazz Man

JAZZ MAN

Lips of sweat,
Igniting catalyst tune as they burn, 
Crossed eyes, attention spreads
feeling the whiteness in the pure magic
Each memo confronts the other, 
Soul cord of depth, 
and for one short-lived moment.
Losing sight of reality in a stasis of oasis.
The passionate barb sticks note directly into the atmosphere
Each message is a flood of scheme, 
singing the blues, this smooth criminal
angel of birth, in your hands
luring you to a road in heaven.
The lights are all you feel; 
you can see the forgotten masterpiece.
Bathing in it, as the drums go on, 
the mob gathers, to feel the whiteness of the trumpet.
He is rotating his saxophone, 
making love to the crowd.
His horn comes with words that deepen the soul,
the crowd is mesmerized.
He extends his hands,
A standing ovation,
Slamming and whistling,
Louder than thunder,
Mr. Jazz man is done
With no condom at all……………………….

by;
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A  Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 4:02 PM
Sweet, Congratulations........ Craig's aka SEAN gots great taste
Lamoureux Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 7:47 AM
I can see why this one was chosen, luv it! Congratulations Linda.
Wigley Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 11:27 PM
Making lurve to the crowd. You caught the mood perfectly, PD. Congrats on your win. Viv x
Stoner Jr Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 2:25 PM
congratulations PD on your win with this fine concert contest write
Haight Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 2:16 PM
Congratulations on your great win, Linda! Your poem was so full of imagery that I felt I was right there! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 1:46 PM
such fabulous imagery Linda I too love jazz and blues - can see why Craig loved this vivid descriptive write congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Pillsbury Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 3:02 PM
Thank you for your warm greeting. You are quite charming for a destroyer of poets. ha I think you must be a destroyer of blues and boredom instead. Nice meeting you!
Lovechild Avatar
March 28, 2015 at 3:36 PM
Being a jazz lover and musician, I get this completely, great write...And luckily we're all on the pill, otherwise, jazz babies all around lol
Gasun Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 1:55 AM
Hi my dearest sis! How are u? Hope you're doing well. Mind me, quite tired @ school but I need to smile then send it to u with my biggest & sweetest hugs:)))Taking my short break now then go home after 3 hrs. I'm stopping by to send u SOUPMAIL. Ok, bye for now, talk to u again later. lovem4evr, Leo
Ekechukwu Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 2:54 AM
Wow! Lack words but love d ending part "with no condom at all" Kudos! Bob- Based On Belief
Kilmer Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 5:06 PM
Being a musician this really appeals to me. You did a great job of describing the live performance. Nothing feels better than that interaction between the crowd and the performer. Condom not required.....Sweet! ~Kilmer
Gasun Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 11:06 PM
Hi, my evrdearest sis! I see you on line. Sending you biggest sweet hugs right away with warm smiles. Hope you're doing well. Mind me, I'm going around the soup while doing multi-task @ home: laundry, cleaning, cooking etc. ;))). Hope you've a great wkend with you & your family. God bless! You're in my thoughts & pray'rs! love m4evr, Leonora
Kithinji Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 3:11 PM
...angel of birth, in your hands... must go back to Jazz 105 and pay attention!
Ryerson Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 4:51 AM
Very jazzy poem...Cool last line...Now what did I do with my...Aha!...In my wallet of course! (I hate these damn things)
Ryerson Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 5:00 AM
Couldn't resist...The farmer's daughter lured 2 helpers into the hay loft "Yeah, you can, but you have to put rubbers on so I won't get pregnant'...A week later one helper said to the other...I don't care if she gets pregnant! I'm takin mine off it's itching like hell' (Sorry)
Devnath  Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 11:55 AM
Hi! my friend, everything passed by the last line. Great congrats on your superb win. Loved always, bl
Oyewole Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 9:32 AM
Excellent Quill and very Heartfelt. I'm faving this one. Congrats on your well deserved win. I love deep work. Well done Mistress. AO
Villarosa Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 2:48 AM
Congratulations on winning this contest, PD. Reading this one has a lively atmosphere like I enjoyed hearing the trendy music. Thank you also for my win in your contest. Appreciate it so much. (^_^) Noel
A   Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 7:22 PM
Thank you for my win G... xox
Bacha Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 5:53 PM
Hi PD, congratulations my dearest friend, I am so happy for you, I loved loved reading your poem. Whoa amazing. Love Terry xoxo a 7>>>>a Fave.
Udaeta Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 5:08 PM
Congrats on this worthy win! Fantastic. Love the end! :) thank you for the feedback on Jitters as well :)
Ober Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 9:31 AM
Congratulations!!! Super awesome job :)
Liwayway Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on your grand win friend PD...its a WOW for me!!! hugs, maria :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 4:48 AM
Hi Pd congratulations on your top spot love xx
Richards Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 7:35 PM
Raz ma taz and congraz to you!!
Delaney Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 6:59 PM
Congrats Linda: This really is a true jazzy poem. Well done PD SuZ
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