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Samurai spirit Honourable, dignified Strong and courageous The sun will never set on The land of the rising sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/13/2011 1:33:00 PM
Japan does seem to have a "samurai spirit" Jack. May the sun shine on the country forever. Good luck in Debbie's contest. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 5/13/2011 12:33:00 PM
Jack, The soul of Old Japan,, will always stan tall.. The land of the rising sun** powerful... Thanks for sharing your fascinated view of unity and spirit thru God, take care,..p.d.
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Date: 5/12/2011 2:46:00 AM
a searing tanka for japan... yes, the sun will still rise, jack.. win, win! just lovely..:)huggs, nette
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Date: 5/11/2011 9:28:00 PM
btw, jack. Triolet are a bit difficult in the beginning but the more you do them, they become really easy after a while!! Try one.
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Date: 5/10/2011 8:47:00 AM
The adjectives you used to describe the Samurai spirit are perfect, Jack. And I love the hope that springs from the last to lines. Outstanding entry for Deb's contest. Always wishing you success, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/10/2011 8:29:00 AM
Yes, they do have a warrior-like spirit, Jack. They have risen above so much and will continue to show their courage. Nice tanka! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/9/2011 10:43:00 PM
a succinct way to do the contest, Jack. Good one!!
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Date: 5/9/2011 1:43:00 PM
Very nice Jack, Linda has said it all... peerfect write my friend
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Date: 5/9/2011 1:26:00 PM
Super Jack.. u encompassed all Japan is in a few lines so poignant my friend.. good luck in the contest luv..
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Date: 5/9/2011 1:21:00 PM
yes, it's really the land of the rising sun, brilliant piece on Japan, jack
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