Jabberwacky

I know a scamp who chortles frabjously
as in the springtime galumphing he goes.
And just to show how wacky he can be,
he makes his tongue point up to touch his nose!

He has no wicked claws or eyes with flame
to match those of the manxome Jabberwock.
But just beware his jaws. Although he’s tame,
he can’t be stopped once he begins to talk!

I vouch that he can jabber endlessly
and have me at the end of my short rope.
My ears just might fall off one day, for he
gyres gibberish just like a gyroscope.

I dub my beamish grandson “Jabberwack”
for how he acts and how he loves to yak!


For Debbie Guzzi's "Go Ask Alice" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Watt Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 9:31 AM
Loved your inclusion of some Lewis Carroll made-up words from the Jabberwocky. He is an author who combines a genius mind with an acute sense of childlike fun. I especially liked your ending couplet that explains this is about your grandson, the Jabberwacky! Cute and clever. I bet he'd be embarrassed by this now that he is a teenager!
Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 1:53 PM
That's a cute whimsical piece, Andrea.
Yvonne Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 2:57 PM
What Harry said, having lots of fun!
Horsman Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 11:19 AM
another wonderful sonnet from you, wow, reading these from the past, i'm enjoying...
Horne Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 2:24 PM
LOL, I remember this one and it still made me laugh!
Johnson Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 1:33 AM
Great n lovely verse babe, great win too. keep m coming, keep it flowing . xo, Don
Brown Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 5:30 AM
Congratulations on your win Debbie's "Go Ask Alice" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Phookan Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 3:46 AM
Congrats on your fabulous win in this contest with this galumphing write...cheerios!!!!
Mehta Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 6:40 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of debbie, Andrea
Onclaud Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 4:54 AM
you made me swoon, andie... best cheers for your big win.. well-deserved! :) huggs!
Johnson Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 11:09 PM
Well I stopped to read your comments on the way to bed. And here you are. I just got under the wire with my nonsense poem. Hope its what she wanted. Yours is cute and makes sense too. Mine is sheer nonsense. Love, joyce
Misra Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 12:01 AM
What frabjous joy to read this whackish poemumbish viandlet! Loved every bit of it. Thanks for sharing.
Babcock Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 8:54 AM
Loved this write Andrea. Our children and grandchildren talk our head off when they are small. Question, questions and more questions. Cute write. love phyl
Lindenmuth Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 7:09 AM
with that gyroscope he will at least maintain soime balance in his conversations, I enjoyed your humorous observation of someone very close to you lengthen the rope just a little bit fore their is wisdom in the the simplicity and honesty of a child's conversation
La France Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 3:41 PM
Excellent, wonderful, stunning, fantastic and a winner, I wish you the best with this entry in the contest~
Mills Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 9:42 AM
when I was only reading poetry mostly I loved and still do love the Jabberwocky! What a wonderful and creative gift you have. I wanted to do this or I mean my own version somehow. What a muse here. Thanks!
Susan Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 7:11 AM
You have such talent! This is a wonderful write!
Austin Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 9:48 AM
Absolutely fabulous, Andrea! Great idea. As usual, you are at your very best with the sonnet form. Love, Dave
Greenlee Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 8:58 AM
I love this.You are incredibly creative.Thanks again for stopping and reading my poems..Have a great afternoon.
Horne Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 6:51 AM
LOL, wow, you've really grabbed Debbie's challenge by the horns. Love it. I had to laugh imagining your grandson and read it all over again, LOL
Mac Donald Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 5:30 AM
You've certainly given a fun spin and shift to the Jabberwocky poem, Andrea! Your gandson sounds like one happy little sprite! Greatly enjoyed this sweet read.:) Best wishes to you all...Mikki
Sweetheart Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 4:39 PM
cool one Andrea.. good luck in the contest..luv your title .. have not checked this one out just yet but will after we get home tomorrow...luv.. u certainly used great vocab in this piece.. hope I meet the expectations of the rules luv.. amazing as always...
Guzzi Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 2:44 PM
Yup, yup Andie line 3 verse 3 yes? Thanks for showing me! HUGS! Light & Love
Puddifoot Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 1:59 PM
this was an original idea too andrea - taking the 'alice' theme and combining it with a personal tale about your grandson, well done...
Brumley Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 1:43 PM
Outstanding Andrea! I love Alice in Wonderland one of my favorite movie and book. Poems from the heart are our best ones don't you think?
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