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Jabberwacky

I know a scamp who chortles frabjously as in the springtime galumphing he goes. And just to show how wacky he can be, he makes his tongue point up to touch his nose! He has no wicked claws or eyes with flame to match those of the manxome Jabberwock. But just beware his jaws. Although he’s tame, he can’t be stopped once he begins to talk! I vouch that he can jabber endlessly and have me at the end of my short rope. My ears just might fall off one day, for he gyres gibberish just like a gyroscope. I dub my beamish grandson “Jabberwack” for how he acts and how he loves to yak! For Debbie Guzzi's "Go Ask Alice" Contest

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Date: 9/5/2020 9:31:00 AM
Loved your inclusion of some Lewis Carroll made-up words from the Jabberwocky. He is an author who combines a genius mind with an acute sense of childlike fun. I especially liked your ending couplet that explains this is about your grandson, the Jabberwacky! Cute and clever. I bet he'd be embarrassed by this now that he is a teenager!
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Date: 4/15/2018 1:53:00 PM
That's a cute whimsical piece, Andrea.
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Date: 2/10/2015 2:57:00 PM
What Harry said, having lots of fun!
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Date: 10/31/2012 11:19:00 AM
another wonderful sonnet from you, wow, reading these from the past, i'm enjoying...
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Date: 12/7/2011 2:24:00 PM
LOL, I remember this one and it still made me laugh!
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Date: 6/22/2011 1:33:00 AM
Great n lovely verse babe, great win too. keep m coming, keep it flowing . xo, Don
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Date: 6/21/2011 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Debbie's "Go Ask Alice" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2011 3:46:00 AM
Congrats on your fabulous win in this contest with this galumphing write...cheerios!!!!
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Date: 6/20/2011 6:40:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of debbie, Andrea
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Date: 6/20/2011 4:54:00 AM
you made me swoon, andie... best cheers for your big win.. well-deserved! :) huggs!
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Date: 6/18/2011 11:09:00 PM
Well I stopped to read your comments on the way to bed. And here you are. I just got under the wire with my nonsense poem. Hope its what she wanted. Yours is cute and makes sense too. Mine is sheer nonsense. Love, joyce
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Date: 6/10/2011 12:01:00 AM
What frabjous joy to read this whackish poemumbish viandlet! Loved every bit of it. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 6/9/2011 8:54:00 AM
Loved this write Andrea. Our children and grandchildren talk our head off when they are small. Question, questions and more questions. Cute write. love phyl
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Date: 6/8/2011 7:09:00 AM
with that gyroscope he will at least maintain soime balance in his conversations, I enjoyed your humorous observation of someone very close to you lengthen the rope just a little bit fore their is wisdom in the the simplicity and honesty of a child's conversation
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Date: 6/7/2011 3:41:00 PM
Excellent, wonderful, stunning, fantastic and a winner, I wish you the best with this entry in the contest~
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Date: 6/7/2011 9:42:00 AM
when I was only reading poetry mostly I loved and still do love the Jabberwocky! What a wonderful and creative gift you have. I wanted to do this or I mean my own version somehow. What a muse here. Thanks!
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Date: 6/6/2011 7:11:00 AM
You have such talent! This is a wonderful write!
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Date: 6/5/2011 9:48:00 AM
Absolutely fabulous, Andrea! Great idea. As usual, you are at your very best with the sonnet form. Love, Dave
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:58:00 AM
I love this.You are incredibly creative.Thanks again for stopping and reading my poems..Have a great afternoon.
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Date: 6/5/2011 6:51:00 AM
LOL, wow, you've really grabbed Debbie's challenge by the horns. Love it. I had to laugh imagining your grandson and read it all over again, LOL
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Date: 6/5/2011 5:30:00 AM
You've certainly given a fun spin and shift to the Jabberwocky poem, Andrea! Your gandson sounds like one happy little sprite! Greatly enjoyed this sweet read.:) Best wishes to you all...Mikki
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Date: 6/4/2011 4:39:00 PM
cool one Andrea.. good luck in the contest..luv your title .. have not checked this one out just yet but will after we get home tomorrow...luv.. u certainly used great vocab in this piece.. hope I meet the expectations of the rules luv.. amazing as always...
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Date: 6/4/2011 2:44:00 PM
Yup, yup Andie line 3 verse 3 yes? Thanks for showing me! HUGS! Light & Love
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Date: 6/4/2011 1:59:00 PM
this was an original idea too andrea - taking the 'alice' theme and combining it with a personal tale about your grandson, well done...
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Date: 6/4/2011 1:43:00 PM
Outstanding Andrea! I love Alice in Wonderland one of my favorite movie and book. Poems from the heart are our best ones don't you think?
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