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strapped to the mast, I recite it so to show what I saw, I had to know no dramatisation of emotion took place I was there, my friend in that space eyes half closed, hope half lost I remained in situ, hung the cost experiencing peril, making it through I don't know why just something I do I tell it, paint it, not for you to understand we're all mere travellers in an unmapped land some see the landscape horizons and sky some see beyond it haze to decipher, untie to see not just out but inwards and deep memories forged in sanity's keep felt through a thread connection outside a cerebral quiver it's perhaps best to hide never far from the harbour safety in sight it doesn't detract from a long dark night ropes secure me physically survive though I'm always unraveling will never thrive I've seen the storm experienced the eye not laboured but battled of all I did try storm after storm even after the break each overwhelming oft more than could take to map out the sight the feel of the wave wake with the mist its power to save feel each brushstroke absorb the strive know this truth it's good to be alive

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Date: 12/7/2023 7:07:00 PM
Dear DD, you interpret the painting's brushstrokes with soulful poetic brilliance! The tempest is captured and tamed and survived within your vivid and emotive verse. Your last line a grand finale to an exquisite piece. Congratulations for your excellent win in Ink Empress's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/9/2023 7:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan, it's a pleasure to get such a beautiful comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem x
Date: 12/7/2023 7:45:00 AM
Wow, Your poem captures the essence of a soul’s journey through life’s tumultuous seas, steadfastly anchored yet perpetually seeking. It’s such a vivid portrayal of resilience in the face of adversity and the quiet triumph found in the simple affirmation of existence. Well Done! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 12/7/2023 10:45:00 AM
Thank you for your enthusiastic comment Daniel, it is gratefully received. So glad you enjoyed it
Date: 12/7/2023 4:21:00 AM
You weaved this one just like a storm.. Congrats on your placement..
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Date: 12/7/2023 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Silent One, paintings like this one just spill all the emotion within the brushstrokes and it feels like just spending time with the painting offers up everything they felt when creating it. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement
Date: 12/7/2023 1:35:00 AM
Dear DD, I absolutely love this poem. Its so profound and so well woven with such real talk and also has an empowering touch. Especially the ending. I love the flow of thoughts in this and this line stood out the most for me “ I tell it, paint it, not for you to understan we're all mere travellers in an unmapped land” wow! That hits home for me! Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/7/2023 10:42:00 AM
Thank you so much Ink, I appreciate the placement and your kind words about my poem. Glad you liked it :)
Date: 12/7/2023 12:50:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Empress's contest. Best wishes. Wen
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Date: 12/7/2023 1:13:00 AM
Thank you Wen <3
Date: 11/21/2023 10:39:00 AM
"I've seen the storm, experienced the eye...it's good to be alive." Spoken with the "brushstroke" of the poet's heart, DD! Another amazing ekphrasis that articulates the sense of chaos, the vertigo, in the whirlpool and undertow of life! Congratulations on your win! I know I've said it before, BUT, I love your ekphrasis! Blessings!
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Date: 11/21/2023 10:45:00 AM
Thanks Sam - I'll put your comments in the blurb should I ever write a book :) glad you liked it x
Date: 11/11/2023 8:29:00 AM
I'm in awe, Di11y! How you were able to tell a story and express the depths of artistic creation via a Ekphrasis is nothing short of miraculous. Your poem was compelling and powerful. I loved everything about it. Have a great day, Sara
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Date: 11/11/2023 9:26:00 AM
You're very kind Sara - I do nothing more than look at the painting, read up on it, then let my mind wander. The story is always just there already in the image. I appreciate your kind words of support x

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