Get Your Premium Membership

I'Ve Made It

Beads of sweat cover my face, It's hard to believe I've made it. I can't stop my breath from changing, It's a challenge and I'll take it. These stairs that bring me higher, This hope that fills me brighter. I can't believe it, I'm here. I can't believe how near. It's a jump, a step into future. It's a leap, a hop into life. A goal that I'm winning, A brand new beginning. A paper in my hands, I know that I can. I've achieved. I've done it! Graduation at last

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/14/2015 1:20:00 PM
- Welcome to P Soup, Hailey ! - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I look forward to your next poem :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/10/2015 12:22:00 AM
Congratulations, Hailey, and a big welcome to Poetry Soup. Hope you enjoy your time here. Viv x
Login to Reply
Date: 6/9/2015 10:59:00 AM
it's all about graduation. Hailey, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 6/9/2015 10:16:00 AM
I'm happy for you, that's an A plus in life. Hailey, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things