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I'Ve Kept Your Memory Close

When memories glow like luminous fireflies and days become another red thread on the horizon I will remember when love was you and I, the soft light that brought comfort to darkness you are the memory inlaid, until death you are the scattered drops that endlessly float in the silent mist of loneliness you are the haunting face, drifting in empty nights you are the eyes in my dreams that rise like two moons in the gray abyss of illusion causing me to wake with cold sweats restless and shaken Yes, I've kept your memory close you were a flaming star crossing the night sky etching a trail, burned into the eyes you were the warm light that vanished in the cold darkness leaving only wishes and a sense of awe that came from shared moments of perfection... 6/1/18

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Date: 6/22/2019 10:03:00 AM
This is quite beautiful, Frederic, and exquisite in its 'wise' sadness--a 1st in my book!
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Date: 6/7/2018 10:32:00 PM
Such poignant emotions so beautifully expressed. Gorgeous imagery. Congratulations, Frederic on your excellent win with your deep and soulful poem. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/7/2018 9:58:00 AM
Lovely, Frederic. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 6/7/2018 7:48:00 AM
Some brilliant metaphoric musing in this one Frederic. The opening line a gentle "come hither" and follow me...thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 6/2/2018 9:24:00 AM
Stunning! Simply stunning, Frederic!
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Date: 6/2/2018 1:27:00 AM
And surely this is poetry, I just loved reading this!
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Date: 6/1/2018 11:07:00 PM
And you are a pure poet, through and through, Frederic! Beautiful verse and truly enjoyed this! :)
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Date: 6/1/2018 4:34:00 PM
That last stanza is amazing...There are many in my life whose memeories i keep close... so many have come and so many Ive lost...
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Date: 6/1/2018 3:37:00 PM
This poem is so well expressed Frederic! I like the line: days become another red thread on the horizon. :)
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