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Many came with bright, lovely f l o w e r s to lay, their T E A R S hung in the tall b e n d i n g trees; and then their WEEPING drifted into the S I L E N C E, I have laid here b e n e a t h the EARTH- years. BENEATH the deep w h i t e snow and g r e e n grass; and a little GIRL came often with Rose, she l a i d ROSE on my tomb, so gently . . . NOW- now, a beautiful young woman comes here. "O h m y s i s t e r l o v e- do not grieve evermore, LEAVE, leave, leave this DARKNESS and come n e v e r m o r e." ____________________ January 7, 2017 Poetry/Verse/Its Too Early To Write Poetry Copyright Protected, ID 17- 863-940-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, It's to early to write poetry sponsor, Ironic Zink Fifth Place

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Date: 2/21/2017 9:49:00 AM
Wow, Constance - I feel it, the sadness and caring on both sides, the green and white washing over the reader.
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Date: 2/19/2017 3:02:00 PM
A haunting whistled through the wind! Love your format! Excellent! Congrats, Constance!
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Date: 2/19/2017 2:59:00 PM
Thank you for your entry, my apologies on the delay. I was detained! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/9/2017 6:33:00 PM
Visually and intellectually unique.
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Date: 1/9/2017 4:58:00 PM
I haven't been here in years, and I can still tell your style. Nice to read you again Constance, nice work -R
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Date: 1/8/2017 3:18:00 PM
Dear Broken wings....Heartwrenching! sad, so!! beautifully expressed, I could feel everything throughout. Yes...Rest in Peace X.
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Date: 1/7/2017 12:20:00 PM
A deep message, BW; as usual enwrapped in beautiful poetic words.
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