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It's Moving Day

Early morning finds her, filling boxes with mementos. Pausing to reflect... Age has taken its toll. Memories have turned to mysteries, confusion a frequent guest. Wiping away a tear, she keeps packing. It's moving day. Uncertainty and trepidation, have taken up residence, in her heart and thoughts. Packing up and leaving behind, fragments of her life - moving only the essentials, enough to fill one room. It's moving day. Once strong and independent, now frail, in need of care. Moving in with her niece, had never been her plan. But plans change. Lives change. She doesn't want to leave her home. She doesn't want to be a burden. It's moving day. As the boxes are loaded in the truck, she takes a last look around. Speaking softly to herself, she says: "It will be nicer where I am going. After all, I'll be surrounded by family. I'll be safer. I should be happy..." Tears fall silently. It's moving day.
Kim Merryman 6/24/15 For Kelly Deschler's Women Only #2 contest.

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Date: 7/17/2015 11:26:00 AM
Kim, a exceptionally moving write, written from the heart, hope your mom settles in nicely. Congrats on your win! Hugs
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/20/2015 5:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Cecilia!
Date: 7/16/2015 3:01:00 PM
The really strikes 'home' for me. It took me so long to enjoy being alone & feel safe, free. I know we all must plan for this and yet it is a painful 'leaving'. Light & Love
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 8:06:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie! This poem was based on having to move my mom into my cousin's home and what I perceived to be her feelings. She didn't want to move but she knew she couldn't be on her won anymore. It was very hard.
Date: 7/15/2015 9:35:00 AM
This is a difficult chapter in many people's lives. Congratulations on your win.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 8:03:00 PM
Yes it is, and it makes me wonder how I will respond to it, but that's far in the future. (hopefully) Thank you, Richard!
Date: 7/15/2015 8:45:00 AM
Oh, what a beautiful but sad story - moving day is not one I am looking forward to! Well done, Kim and congratulations on your wonderful win! Pandita
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 7:59:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Pandita!
Date: 7/14/2015 11:44:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 7:52:00 PM
Thank you, Skat!
Date: 7/14/2015 11:30:00 PM
Great poem I bet many women can relate to... Congrats on your win!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 7:52:00 PM
Thank you, Lee!
Date: 7/14/2015 10:32:00 PM
Moving is always an emotional event, especially when you've lived in the same place for so long... You've expressed those feelings so well here. Congrats on the win, Kim!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 7/16/2015 7:51:00 PM
Thank you for my placement in your contest, Kelly!
Date: 6/24/2015 10:46:00 PM
Such a moving poem! So sad, and something we will all face at some point one way or another!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/28/2015 3:39:00 PM
Thank you, Arthur! Unfortunately you are right. This was written about having to move my mom last month. It's been difficult.
Date: 6/24/2015 9:08:00 PM
Kim, oh what a heartbreaking poem and how beautifully penned, 7
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Constance La France
Date: 6/28/2015 3:44:00 PM
or even just giving up a home or apartment and moving in with relatives like your Mom had to do
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Constance La France
Date: 6/28/2015 3:42:00 PM
The reality is heartbreaking, this happens to people over and over, I know because I work in a long term care facility and I see the sadness each time a new resident arrives
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/28/2015 3:37:00 PM
Thank you, Constance! This was written about having to move my mom into my cousin's home in CA last month. It was and is a difficult time for everyone in the family.
Date: 6/24/2015 8:18:00 PM
oh, kim, this is so sad but so beautifully written! you've captured so much emotion in this poem describing a situation that is all too real. best of luck in the contest...
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/28/2015 3:35:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene! This is actually written about moving my mom into my cousin's home in CA last month. It was hard.

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