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It's Always Been You, My Love

When pebbles no longer surface the shore, is when I shall love you no more- For it’s a l w a y s been you that I adore, so let’s become one, and close the door. We have so many great things in store. When the petals no longer encompass a ROSE, is when I shall love you no more- May we keep the p a s s i o n, nights of REPOSE. When dry land is never saturated with rain, is when no more love for you shall remain- I will never be filled with anger or disdain, as we e m b r a c e our romance, love shall sustain. I am the beauty your heart shall contain. When the branches no longer attach the LEAVES, is when no more love for you shall remain- For in my t r u t h and light you always BELIEVE. When p a s s i o n exists without a kiss, is when I shall leave our love’s abyss- For when you are away, it’s your touch I miss, and as I lay on my bed I start to reminisce about how I could never live without this. When the sea starts to run DRY, is when I shall leave our love’s a b y s s- If you ever walked away I would literally DIE. We share an enduring commitment beyond comprehension. October 16, 2017

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Date: 11/18/2017 6:24:00 PM
congrats on your win with this lovely form and I will try and come up with a poem for the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/19/2017 9:19:00 AM
thank you sweet Jan :)
Date: 11/11/2017 11:26:00 AM
This is absolutely beautiful, Laura. I willingly and easily latched on to be pulled in. Hope all things are just right in your world! All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 11/13/2017 2:43:00 AM
thank you sweet CayCay :) I'm good hope all is well with you too! :)
Date: 11/7/2017 5:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Laura - nicely done, my friend! :-)
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/7/2017 12:09:00 PM
oh thank you sweet Gregory :) You are so kind :)
Date: 11/6/2017 11:59:00 PM
Congratulations, Laura on your win.
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/7/2017 12:09:00 PM
thank you dear Subimal :)
Date: 11/6/2017 9:15:00 PM
Congratulations Laura on your win with your beautifully written and rhymed poem. Excellent!
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/7/2017 12:09:00 PM
thank you sweet Susan :)
Date: 11/6/2017 8:01:00 PM
Your rhymes are always spot on Laura, I don't think you've ever not placed in my top 3, guess that means you know what I like, congrats on another fine win!
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/7/2017 12:09:00 PM
oh thanks Dear John, yes I think we have similar tastes in rhyming Thank you so much!!! :)
Date: 11/5/2017 10:00:00 AM
Beautiful, Laura, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/7/2017 12:08:00 PM
thank you sweet Eve :)
Date: 11/5/2017 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/7/2017 12:08:00 PM
thank you dear Line!!! :)
Date: 11/5/2017 6:55:00 AM
congratulations, Laura on your great win.
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/7/2017 12:08:00 PM
many thanks sweet Subimal :)
Date: 11/5/2017 6:52:00 AM
Some beautiful lines in this poem Laura.. I'm sure your husband would have loved this.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/7/2017 12:08:00 PM
yes he did! thank you for my placement sweet Silent One :)
Date: 11/3/2017 6:47:00 AM
Lovely imagery and a great form, Laura - nice example for us to follow. All the best, John.
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/7/2017 12:07:00 PM
many thanks John :)
Date: 11/2/2017 8:13:00 PM
Hi, Laura. I came to see your example poem. It's very lovely. Reminds me of some songs from my era, the early 70's. So from the way I understand your rules, you must finish with a free line that just sums everything up! Is this a form you invented? It should be fun to try it!
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/7/2017 12:07:00 PM
yeah that's how it should be :) Yes I came up with this myself. I enjoy different rhyme schemes! Thank you sweet Andrea :)
Date: 11/2/2017 8:07:00 AM
Laura, what an emotional and beautifully penned poem and great example for your contest!
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/7/2017 12:06:00 PM
thank you sweet lady! :)

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