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It's a part of me, whatever

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Posted for Suzette Richard's Whatever contest.

To submit the first line of an older poem. My line is from my poem called It's a part of me.

https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/its_a_part_of_me_1304975

Our lives are not immune to the impact of time.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2023 10:52:00 AM

Great first line. Congrats

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/15/2023 6:05:00 PM

Dear Silent One, you opening line is intriguing, makes a potent statement and sets the tone for a thought-provoking poem. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Suzette's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/15/2023 10:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A great one liner. So very true. If we could only understand time. Have a wonderful day..................

Valsa George

Date: 12/15/2023 12:59:00 AM

A great statement of an infallible truth... complete in itself. Congratulations Silent one on your First line win.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/12/2023 9:47:00 AM

Wow, you posted for the contest! So good to see this take and it's absolutely a very wise first line that evokes so many emotions in an intriguing way.. Philosophically deep too, with which I agree.. Best of luck to you for the contest!!

Karen Jones

Date: 12/11/2023 5:49:00 PM

Love this first line. Makes a statement!

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/11/2023 5:21:00 PM

First lines, like first impressions never fade. Best of luck with the contest, my friend.

Tom Woody

Date: 12/11/2023 3:25:00 PM

I wonder if impacts should be singular? Heck, what do I know. Profound truth in that sentence

Silent One
Date: 12/11/2023 4:05:00 PM

Noted thanks

Ink Empress

Date: 12/11/2023 10:26:00 AM

Ahhh! Awwn! Its cute for you to do these sorta prompts hah. Well you taught me how important an opening line is. And i see now why and ive always known why too, cus you are the king of first lines. And this is what can i say a brilliant opening and so powerful! And i agree with you. Best wishes for the contest.