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It Was Then Ca

I found myself in anguish from atrocious acts My heart was barely pumping, too much to tolerate All things in my life seemed to go awry Scattered around with the confusion that I felt I tried creative ways to assuage the suffering Then, I tried something new and took a chance I tossed worry in the wind, threw away the fear And my actions were auspicious, my heart renewed Opening like a flower ready to accept love again There came an appetency that led my way All the while someone with allure, stood in my sight Guiding me through each difficult day and night As healing came about within me, it was then I did absolve Heidi Sands 10/10/19 Placed 2nd in the Crazy A’s poetry contest. Sponsor: Words required: Anguish, Awry, Auspicious, Atrocious, Assuage, Appetency, Allure, Absolve

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Date: 11/3/2019 7:04:00 PM
this is beautifully written Heidi...so glad to see it on the winner's list...congratulations :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/3/2019 9:07:00 PM
Thank you very much Sandra :)
Date: 11/3/2019 6:26:00 PM
This is one of your best writes Heidi, you have really grown as a writer in the last year or so, excellent write congrats on a fine podium finish!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/3/2019 6:32:00 PM
Wow, thank you so much John. You made my day. I appreciate your kind feedback! :)
Date: 10/11/2019 12:03:00 PM
A well written piece with imagery alluring through the A words.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/11/2019 12:53:00 PM
Thank you Jeanne :)
Date: 10/11/2019 8:13:00 AM
You did well with this... much better than I did :) I tried, but hum... Yours is great and I hope you win. Blessings always, Gina
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/11/2019 9:33:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment and blessings Regina :)
Date: 10/10/2019 5:26:00 PM
You manged to incorporate the required words in a rather short poem..skillfully written, cohesive words. All the best, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/10/2019 6:00:00 PM
I appreciate your positive feedback Vijay. Thank you for the supportive comment :)
Date: 10/10/2019 2:46:00 PM
This was really good Heidi. I like how you ended it as well, with one of the contest words. I know John will like this. Best wishes my friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/10/2019 2:52:00 PM
Thank you very much Chris. I am grateful for your support and kindness! :)

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