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It Was a Good Morning Until

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"Billy, it's time! Get up for school!' "But, Mom- my arm is hurting bad! Oh please don't make me, don't be cruel- I must stay home- though I am sad." "But, Billy, can you lift your arm?" "I can't, it's painful and too sore!" She quickly asked, with Mommy charm, "How high could you lift it before?" Then, Billy raised his arm up tall above his head! His face turned red! From his warm bed, he had to crawl- get ready quick- for school instead. February 16, 2021 Premiere Contest: It Was a Good Morning Until Sponsor: Tania Kitchin (Revision of a poem posted May 5, 2016)

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Date: 2/21/2021 6:10:00 AM
Too funny Sandra. Sounds just like a kid I know. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 2/20/2021 10:29:00 PM
Hi Sandra, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/20/2021 8:44:00 PM
I remember those days my children complain and even myself. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/20/2021 7:43:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in Tania's contest with this fun and wonderfully penned poem _Constance
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Date: 2/20/2021 6:39:00 PM
Hahaha! Good one! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 2/20/2021 3:37:00 PM
Haha the certainly try it on Sandra, congrats on your win. Tom
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Date: 2/20/2021 1:59:00 PM
Bravo, Sandra. Awesome poem. So cute ~ congrats on a most deserving poem.
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Date: 2/20/2021 1:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement, Sandra.
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Date: 2/20/2021 12:05:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet and funny poem, I can see this happening, Billy was outsmarted!
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