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It Tears Me Apart

Something is burrowing into my heart, drilling so deep, it's tearing me apart. And reason dies in the wake of this thing, drowning in the hurt that it's sure to bring. I awake every day feeling its pain, why I endure it is hard to explain. But yelling and crying won't make it go, for it digs in, when the tears start to show. Sorting out truths within garbage of lies, it wades through refuse immune to surprise. Yet in the eyes of my son, it's evil, keeping his life in constant upheaval. My agony's increased over the years, my nerves are tattered and twisted by fears. And though it's crazy, I beg it to stay, absolving its pain as it rips away. I'll gladly suffer its wrath to my death, and welcome its sting with my final breath. For love's the only monster in my heart, guarding my son, as it has from the start. (Rhyme) 3/20/2017

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Date: 5/17/2018 8:08:00 AM
Beautiful poem about a father's love.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/17/2018 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your visit my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/23/2017 2:41:00 AM
Wow. Your poem is heart wrenching. I can relate to that. 'Begging it to stay', can stand on its own. I must read more of your poetry, Kai
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/23/2017 11:17:00 AM
Thanks so much Kai, I welcome your visits and appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 3/21/2017 4:03:00 AM
Hello Emile. Poetry is all about heart and soul not to mention the emotive factor. This entry has all that. This is very expressive emotional and powerful. Allow me to let your words stand. Well done throughout.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/21/2017 9:00:00 AM
Thanks so much Lisa, I welcome your visits and appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 3/20/2017 6:48:00 PM
the picture is worth a thousand words and we can feel your deep emotion in the poetry, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/21/2017 9:02:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea, I welcome your input and appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 3/20/2017 4:57:00 PM
Powerfully emotive, Emile! I was not expecting the ending and went back and re-read it to get the full context. Greatly expressed. Blessings, Kim
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/20/2017 5:37:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim, I welcome your visits and appreciate your comments, Emile.

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