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It Snowed In My Dream

 
~~*~~ It snowed and snowed the day that I was born, and for that reason I love falling snow; in dreams, I walk the frozen woods till morn, and from my pen the words just drip and flow. Since childhood I've been still and I've been odd, choosing to read old books and write my words; In nature, I would wander and be awed, while loving songs and beauty of sweet birds. The snow is falling softly this long night, I chant a song- to keep the ghosts away; and tears are falling, falling till first light. Can they not stay in tombs in their decay? Can they just please, just go away, away, and leave my soul and heart in peace, to pray? ____________________ October 28, 2016 Poetry/English Sonnet/It Snowed In My Dream Copyright Protected, ID 16-844-112-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, English Sonnet sponsor, Janice Canerdy Second Place
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Beaufort Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 8:10 PM
You have a golden touch. Even the ghosts are perhaps put off by the sweet voice you have. It's something that is always there--both ghosts and your love of life. Remarkable you are. How flattered they are that you pay such attention to them and never forget. They might be, at times, smiling over your shoulder and living their lives through your view of this earth. If there were more like you, this would be such a peaceful planet.
Kimathi Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 2:53 AM
I could feel the emotions in every verse..... Congrats BW, for your WIN with this lovely piece!!! ;-)
Haight Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 6:53 PM
Very beautiful, Constance. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Onclaud Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:32 AM
lovely work of art, constance... kudos on your fine win... huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:19 AM
You did this well Constance, congrats.
George   Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 7:33 PM
Beautiful in every way, Constance. Many congrats on your wn. Lainey
Pennell  Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 6:48 PM
very nice this is broken wings sonnet. congrats on your win
Canerdy Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 6:04 PM
Constance, Congratulations on your win in my contest. Thanks for entering! Janice
Inman Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 7:31 AM
A lovely piece BW.
La France Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 11:54 AM
James thanks for visiting with the lovely
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 8:44 PM
this is beautiful, Constance. (see my hotmail I sent you!!)
La France Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Andrea, thanks for visiting with the beautiful ~
Green Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 12:48 PM
Quite beautiful and enchanting. This one feels soft like falling snow, gathering in our minds as we read.
La France Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 11:52 AM
Chris, thanks for visiting, and for the beautiful, I love that word ~
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