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It Rang Twice

He dialed his home number from his cell, it rang twice, a man’s voice answered as far as he could tell, he hung up without answering back, in his mind, everything went dark, and suddenly black, when he got home, he was all alone, there was no sign of a man anywhere, not here, nor there, he looked everywhere, but what seemed odd, was the fact that no man has ever been there, no male clothes in the closet, no change on the night-stand, no evidence of any man, nothing was found, even the toilet seat was down, he then heard a bump and then a bang, he called his house again, and it rang, he couldn’t find the phone, but this time he wasn’t alone, it rang twice, but it was coming from the basement, that was where the phone kept ringing, and when he went down, that’s where he saw his body swinging...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/13/2009 12:37:00 PM
Frank, quite a Hitchcockian twist at the end here! I like your style - Carolyn
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Date: 2/9/2009 8:32:00 AM
.... chills....... on this one! Great and vivid writing, I was reading as fast as I could to see how it ended! Shivers!! Delightfully creepy and I agree with Karen, worthy of a Hitchcock movie! Glad the sun is shining! hehe ;) Love, Amy
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Date: 2/7/2009 9:45:00 AM
Very good job of writing my friend. The ending to this piece is very strong. Thanks for the love on my poem this morning.
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Date: 2/7/2009 6:40:00 AM
This was a very good read. Kept me on the the edge and the ending, very twightlight zone. Awesome write, Thank you for sharing! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/6/2009 8:09:00 PM
spooky poem, but I liked it. Coming back to your own home and finding yourself hanging in the basement....scary. Good write
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Date: 2/6/2009 4:02:00 PM
A bit scary--just right for a Hitchcock movie. The tempo of the poem works. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 2/5/2009 1:07:00 PM
Dang child I bet you pee the bed, I was 2 inches from the stupid screen reading this one and realised I wasn't breathing. Thank God for daylight, shivers like this should only happen when the sun is shining. Eeekks Im still creeped, smiling but creeped.
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