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It Makes No Sense At All

Does it really matter who actually eventually wins As we voters give our lives, do they give us their skins Do they really care about who votes them into power As we voters give our lives, in power, us, they devour How many do remember, where they actually came from And do they walk our walk, when voted in sing song How can we trust their hand, their smile when they need us And their continual door to us closed, all because we make a fuss Our fuss we make is not born, it's created in our lives How many of us remember, it's in their voted strive When does our strive resist, to be taken as we exist For many days to weeks, we're in continual wanting persist Whether Democrat or Republican, when elected look into voters eyes Or be forgotten from hence you came, and in us we'll soon despise <*>

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/19/2013 1:05:00 AM
This is well written, and the Gods truth. They sweet talk you till they get what they want ;}
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Date: 12/19/2012 7:27:00 AM
My friend, you have understood very soon that their promises are nothing but snowflakes that melt at the first glance of the sun’s rays the morning after! Enjoyed your poem, very true!
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Date: 12/13/2012 12:53:00 AM
Yes James get 'ye hence I think its best To say; to the greater benefit; outside The front fence let them stay.." L O L
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Date: 12/9/2012 9:29:00 PM
nice
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Date: 12/7/2012 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "Reps vs Dems" contest. Love Carol
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Date: 12/5/2012 12:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win James xx
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Date: 12/3/2012 6:51:00 PM
Too bad isn't it [sigh] congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/3/2012 6:02:00 PM
James. :-) CONGRATULATIONS ON A POEM WELL DONE..... ALWAYS & FOREVER~ linda
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Date: 12/3/2012 5:34:00 PM
thank you for the awesome poem. always~SKAT
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Date: 11/28/2012 12:48:00 PM
This is a great write! Had to stop in to see one of my faves as school as gotten more complicated! Have a great day Mr. Fraser!
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Date: 11/25/2012 5:58:00 PM
Hello James, I just came across a poem you wrote about my mom, Karen Feist. It was on a different website, but I just wanted to say thank you....it is a beautiful poem, brought tears to my eyes. She was an amazing woman. Thanks again. Kira
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Date: 11/22/2012 1:36:00 PM
Very interesting write. Perfect political poem.
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Book: Shattered Sighs