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'It' is Finished

My life slows down
more days in medical care than at home,
experts can’t track 
what makes my heart tick like it does.
My failing mind loses weight,
I’m moved to auxiliary care
longing for the end.
Do not grieve for me,
my life on earth is finished
I’m ready for heaven.

11th gradeanxietygrieflifegrook

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Constance La France

October 1, 2024 at 10:42 AM

Reason, , congratultions on your win in my Grook contest, Constance

Sara Kendrick

August 24, 2024 at 7:24 AM

Very moving work penned in this one. I know it is not you of whom you are speaking, but someone close to you which is very hard on the loved ones to have to watch happen to their family member. Thanks for sharing this one with us via Constance's contest. Congratulations on being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K

Reason A. Poteet

August 24, 2024 at 7:27 AM

thank you so much, Sara. Your support is valued likely more than you know at this time. I am experiencing God's grace; He is able; He is beyond mere belief.

Paula Goldsmith

August 23, 2024 at 2:22 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet very sad write. It is Not over until God says so. Write On... Have a blessed day writing away...........

Reason A. Poteet

August 24, 2024 at 6:44 AM

I thank you, Paula for you continued support and encouragement. I like your comment: It is Not over until God says so. Some bow down to Christ early; some late; but ALL will bow some day to our Savior, the Son of God.

Linda Alice Fowler

August 22, 2024 at 2:08 PM

Hi Reason. Reminds me of a known end and being prepared. Congratulations! :)

Reason A. Poteet

August 23, 2024 at 5:46 AM

Right on! No changing your mind in hell, too late. Thanks for your comment and congrats.

Kim Rodrigues

August 22, 2024 at 7:38 AM

Truly? Or just a write… So sad, but heartlifting when one readies themselves for heaven. 2 weeks ago lost a church friend and this lovely, gracious saint had readied herself. Always a smile and hug…her kin were heartbroken. Hugs and congrats!

Reason A. Poteet

August 23, 2024 at 5:55 AM

It is a write for my husband (who recently passed after only three months of constant care) and for many who in care homes are forgotten. Yes, indeeed the heartaches (and guilt) in death lie with the family and friends. Thanks for commenting and congrats.