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Though time keeps ticking away, I lay in my bed crying. And despite what my friends say, it sure feels like I'm dying. An ache that will not subside; barely describes how I feel. For; it hurts so much inside; it's the only thing real. Innocence clouded my eyes, ignoring my silent scream. And whispers morphed into lies; drawn from a fantasy dream. Love can't simply disappear; if it was really there. And yet, all that's left is fear; fate is cruel and unfair. I hoped to grow old with you; not thinking of suicide. But when I knew we were through, hope slowly withered; and died. (Quatrain) 9/24/2015

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Date: 3/14/2018 1:16:00 PM
Very realistic poem "For it hurts so much inside pain’s the only thing that’s real". Well done, Emile.
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Date: 3/14/2018 1:49:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are much appreciated, Emile.
Date: 9/25/2015 9:41:00 AM
Emile, this kind of pain stabs the heart and is like no other pain. Your words bring that feeling to life so well. So sad, but such a powerful poem. Sandra
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Date: 9/25/2015 1:46:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, your visits and comments are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 9/24/2015 4:24:00 PM
When we feel deceived by lies, it cuts like a knife, even worst than the horrible truth of goodbye. Heartbreaking poem...
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Date: 9/24/2015 4:25:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 9/24/2015 3:38:00 PM
Sad write Emile. I could feel the pain expressed in your words. Relationships cause so much pain. We all need love or to love. When we have it and then loose it, it makes us desperate and depressed, to do something we would not normally do.
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Date: 9/24/2015 4:23:00 PM
Thank you Michael, I appreciate your wonderful comments. Emile
Date: 9/24/2015 2:17:00 PM
Many of us know, I'm sure of the devastation you describe. Tends to harden the shell for many. Very touching
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Date: 9/24/2015 4:25:00 PM
Thank you Janet, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 9/24/2015 12:38:00 PM
I hope every human knows the feel you described so well because only then may they truly feel the blessing of reciprocated love. Another gem from your capable pen ... CayCay
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Date: 9/24/2015 4:26:00 PM
Thank you CayCay, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 9/24/2015 11:55:00 AM
This cuts to the heart, Emile. These are such deep feelings....there is nothing more difficult than betrayal. Written very well...
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Date: 9/24/2015 4:26:00 PM
Thank you Eileen, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 9/24/2015 11:07:00 AM
This is most saddening read in the evening.It describes a feeling that can go nowhere,where no fruits can grow and that is cemented in those stanzas.Left me in a melancholic mood.
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Date: 9/24/2015 11:42:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and comments Miraj, I appreciate it. Emile.

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