It ain’t heavy it’s my boulder

One must imagine Sisyphus’s 
boulder, marble-sized these days
And Ozymandias’ plaque,
spinning despair into praise
Look on, ye hypocrites, 
and sneer at my undoing
Your universe is a giant sandpit, 
entropy accruing

Their legacies long crumbled, 
eroded by rust
Gods built the wrong way, 
on scaffolds of dust
Virtue or vice register 
equally the same
Except between stars, 
there’s space for one more grain

Down here, we clock in daily, 
stack hours like prayer
Worship strong Wi-Fi, 
evangelize on thin air
Imagine heavenly echoes,
because the silence isn’t fair
Some develop connection, 
others a thousand-yard stare

Our Earth splits naturally, 
along seismic lines
Greenwich claims centre stage, 
only for the meantime
Sisyphus, still aching, 
gets an epidural at last
But only in hindsight, 
for his hump blocks the past

Redrawn are our own lines, 
watchtowers in the sand
Sketching new borders, 
carving up the promised land
Exhume ancient treasure, 
and black, viscous stuff
Addicted to all things buried, 
as if our dead weren’t enough

Still we write blindly, 
tracing glyphs already faded
Helps lift the mood 
when depressed and jaded
Gods stand on shaky ground, 
myth holds them together
In schisms that bind billions,
then sever forever

Oh, look on—ye poet 
Sisyphus now rolls his eyes
He’s seen the apps, wars, 
hoodies, and cable ties
His hamster wheel’s a meme 
for gods who merely try
Small wonder he mutters, 
at least Ozymandias gets to die

And sometimes I pray to gods, 
or maybe their ghosts
About versions of me 
I’ve been missing the most
They don’t directly answer, 
but do leave this guess
In the end, to keep on rolling 
may be my passing success

By David Kavanagh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Fowler Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 5:35 AM
Excellent David. Strong rhyming accentuates the fun.I smiled while reading this one David. Just superb! Congratulations on a deserving POTD! :)
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 10:52 AM
You’re very kind Linda, some madcap humour in this one, with serious undertones for mankind, thanks so much for the visit and congrats, cheers David
Cunningham Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 12:39 AM
Belated Congratulations to you David on your POTD honour. I'm taking a break from soup at the moment as I'm working on a slideshow for a family reunion and it's taking longer than I thought. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 5:55 AM
Thanks so much Tom for taking time to pop in with congratulations, Think I’m getting back to myself slowly but steadily, i’m sure your slideshow will be the star attraction of the family reunion, delighted to hear from you, cheers David
Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 11:49 AM
We have so much more info and egos are constantly stroked. It is so important to step back into the real world..occasionally bored, quiet, meditating on your own thoughts for their own sake, etc… Enjoyed this very much! Congrats on POTD!
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 12:27 PM
Wise words Kim, luckily we live in countries where where we have the luxury of being bored, quiet, and time to meditate if we wish, glad you enjoy this piece, thanks so much for congratulations, cheers David
Slaughter Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 10:06 AM
A great piece, David, and an excellent choice for POTD. Congrats!
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 12:07 PM
You’re very kind Jim, I’m delighted you enjoyed this piece, and rate it as worthy, cheers David
Bartley Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 10:02 AM
Congrats on your well-deserved POTD! A very fun read. Thanks for sharing.
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 12:05 PM
Thank you Benjamin, of course some surface fun here, but just below there’s a more sobering dig into human hubris and perceived greatness, thank you so much for congrats, cheers David
Anaya Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 9:40 AM
...Icarus had wax wings and his day in the sun and Prometheus was able to stand and de-liver, ~lol. Congratulations on your POTD! A humorous piece resonating with many a poet, your on a roll :) Anaya
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 12:00 PM
Haha! Believe it or not Anaya, Prometheus’s eternal torment nearly made it’s way into this one as chopped liver for breakfast each morning, but I’ll save that for another day lol! Thanks so much for dropping back with congratulations, cheers David
Greenhough Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 7:19 AM
Your poem is outstanding in a way that combines contrasting eras in history through carefully chosen words and rhyme. It rings to my ears like chimes in the wind. Congratulations on POTD. We'll deserved.
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 11:52 AM
High praise Hilda, I am delighted this one resonated with you and rings in your ears like chimes in wind, how poetic! I enjoyed writing this one in rhyme without any syllable restrictions or tight contest rules, a real part of what I am is in this piece, thank you so much, cheers David
Empress Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 5:37 AM
Dear David, Welcome back, and you came back with a powerful poem, it isnt always in a poem we feel various shades of emotions, I smiled as I read sispyphus roll his eyes, seeing what has become of the world; and I felt as i read the lines "Still we write blindly, tracing glyphs already faded Helps lift the mood when depressed and jaded" so true, and i think many can resonate with those words. Theres so much delivered here using mythology and realism, which not many can do in such an engaging manner! Pleasure visiting your poem: congratulations on receiving potd! Well deserved! Sending you light always
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 10:56 AM
Heya Ink I’m delighted you enjoyed this piece, and see way beyond humanity’s hubris and facade, as indeed Shelly did when he wrote Ozymandias over 200 years ago, its arguably more relevant now than ever, as for entropy I’m not convinced it’s the (be all and end all) insofar as the cosmos is concerned, I have my own theories on that lol! I’ll take that light you send with open arms, thanks so much for great comment and congratulations, cheers David
Rodgers Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 5:15 AM
Hello David, Congrats on POTD! Your humor and insight cut right through the absurdity, making the struggle feel oddly noble. Very clever existential ride. Spring Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 10:33 AM
A fair comment Daniel (oddly noble) does it for me every day, I do tend to see the absurdity and perhaps laud more absurdity upon it, existentialism is indeed at the heart of this piece, and most of my poems, for better or worse lol! Thanks so much for stopping by today, cheers David
Kitchin Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 4:31 AM
David, a great poem, congratulations on POTD.
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 8:48 AM
Heya Tania, glad you enjoyed the read, thanks for kind congratulations, cheers David
Grubb Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 4:21 AM
David, this is outstanding--mythic, sharp, and full of movement. The way you weave Sisyphus and Ozymandias into commentary on persistence and decay feels both timeless and urgent. That stanza on worshipping Wi-Fi and evangelizing on thin air hit hard--it’s painfully sharp in its observation of our era. There's a quiet resilience beneath it all, a defiant impulse to keep writing, imagining, pushing forward despite entropy. This was an incredible read, David. Congrats on your POTD.
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 8:44 AM
You sum my poem up with keen insight and wonderful comment Mickey, one does wonder what the great Ozymandias and Sisyphus would make of our modern tech world, and battle to keep entropy at bay; fast forward another 3000 years I’m not even sure if humans will still be here, hopefully they are, and go easy on us lol! Thanks so much for stopping by today with congrats, cheers David
Jones Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 2:54 AM
Enjoy your potd honor David! Congratulations!
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 8:27 AM
Thank you for reading and congratulations Karen, always a pleasure to have you stop by, cheers David
Andresen Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 2:52 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., David ... well deserved ... enjoy your day :) - hugs
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 4:38 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise, I’ve been out of sorts and off the soup for a while now, I’m delighted this one received POTD, cheers David
Lane Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 1:28 AM
“Look on ye hypocrites” at this poem of the day. My smile reaches across a thousand yards.
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 4:27 AM
Ha thanks so much Lin, and smile on, the nature of life is just to enjoy the moment at hand, so I won’t be wasting time building any statues of myself that will eventually crumble, this one is for the common man/woman, that shoulder the boulder everyday, cheers David
Edmonds  Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 12:48 AM
Congratulations David on having received the honour of poem of the day. A marvellous write… Beryl
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 4:20 AM
Heya Beryl, I’m absolutely delighted this particular one got POTD honours, but more so for Shelly’s masterpiece that inspired me back to writing again, thank you, cheers David
Beaufort Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 7:49 PM
...created is a real brain teaser. One being envious of the other is quite a construction. You've got me thinking about the nature of human biology. We get to experience what we have due to the specialized nature of various tissues and organs. Yet that very specialization condemns us to die. So, we can't have everything. I'll just take smiling for the time being until calling it quits!!
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 4:17 AM
I do try to smile my way through most situations that life throws up Duke, except when the universe or the Gods seem to be conspiring against me, I’m sure most people will relate to that at some point in life lol! I’m not calling it quits just yet either, the price we pay for life is indeed our tissues, organs, and ultimately mortality, thank so much for stopping by with wise philosophical comments, cheers David
Beaufort Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 7:46 PM
David, you've penned a very thoughtful poem about living and the meaning of it or lack of meaning of it all. I particularly liked greenwich claims center stage only for the meantime. That pun made me laugh. I also liked the ending. Since we're stuck here for a brief period, we might as well make the best of what we have. Some of us are lucky enough to have a feeling of pleasure being alive. Something to strive for and obtain before we leave. The interplay between Sisyphus and Ozamandias you've
Anaya Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 9:23 AM
Sisyphus-my patron saint, whether it's Sisyphus rolling the boulder up the hill for eternity or buddhas analogy of the dog chasing its tail, it resonates. Some say life is short, but a day can be eternity, at the end death can be a friend, (not that i promote that) poets weird about it. A mind expanding read, David. Wild horses couldn't keep you away I see~ good thing and i'll fave as well!
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 9:54 AM
Heya Anaya, I agree life is all about perspective and how consciousness resonates within, poetry perhaps too binds us all together for better or worse, with a fate like Sisyphus one could imagine death being his friend, but Camus said one must imagine Sisyphus being happy, thank you so much for stopping by and the Fave, cheers David
Lane Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 9:02 AM
Faving for lines... "Look on, ye hypocrites, and sneer at my undoing," and "Sisyphus, still aching, gets an epidural." Using Shelley's Ozymandias.. I could go on, David, but you know I'd have to list many more lines that were just as creative. I wish I could dig that deep into my inner self to write something like this.
Lane Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 10:24 AM
Only to those deserving, do I ever cast my fave,
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 10:10 AM
You have me spoiled Lin, and I’m pretty sure you could dig down into your inner self and write on this or any subject whatsoever, the fact you can relate to this or even these characters shows it’s within you as a human being, the poetry is secondary, thanks so much for the bonus comment and Fave, cheers David
Lane Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 8:54 AM
I'm in so much awe after reading this twice, David that I don't know where to begin praising what you've created. I immensely dislike the time you take for yourself when you exit the PS door, but if this is what you create while you're away... it's ALMOST worth the wait for your return. Sisyphus should've kept rolling his eyes as we do here when the boulders become too heavy to roll uphill alone. That's what friends are for. He should've let it roll downhill, landing where it may. Welcome back, sweet friend.
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 9:10 AM
Heya Lin, thanks so much for high praise and warm welcome back, I’ve been out of sorts for a while now, and was inspired after reading Shelly’s Ozymandias the other day, Sisyphus just seemed to roll across my mind as he does now and again, So decided to put my shoulder to the boulder and give him a dig out, I’m delighted you enjoyed this one about the ancients with a modern twist on this insane world, thanks so much, will visit your page soon I’ve a lot of catching up to do, cheers David
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