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Islet of Fancy

The porous moon drips wine into the crystal goblet of fancy as late night beguiles my skin, reeling on a Friday parade of lights; my hips oh so beckon, swaggering to and fro.. impossible to deny the islet's ride of a soul flitting in an out of supple thoughts when imagination dangles on anklets of stars as naked rhythm grows, my free will abides to sip the juice of this one night.. and out on a fiesta, dear Isis wheels the carousel along colored banners, sprinkling tinsels on a dream-like ride oh so high to reel magic in my heart tingling flesh against ingot of time...endless, I will not wake, not yet. . ... .. Island Of Fantasy Contest for Nayda Ivette Negron Submitted 6/8/2016 Isis--Goddess of Magic

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Date: 7/9/2013 9:37:00 AM
Nette this is a lovely poem. Your creativity and imagination is always outstanding, such talent my friend. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/8/2013 8:24:00 PM
A great win, Nette. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/8/2013 5:36:00 AM
hi Nette super most enjoyable poem congrats on your win ty for entering Shadow x smiles
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Date: 6/25/2013 4:17:00 PM
Dreamy and beautiful
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Date: 6/25/2013 10:54:00 AM
Excellent beauty about kismet lovely worded in poem. It's genius. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/25/2013 7:23:00 AM
Excellent. Well pened. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 6/24/2013 8:49:00 PM
It's a joy to read your poems every time you post them! This one is no different, it is far greater than anything I write! You keep outdoing yourself with each piece that you write! What a precious write this one truly is! I really loved reading this enlightening poem this evening! Great Work!!
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Date: 6/24/2013 4:50:00 PM
Majestic as the porous moon!
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Date: 6/24/2013 4:44:00 PM
Excellent use of the language here - and you even have a classical reference which adds to the poem's effect. Good job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/24/2013 4:37:00 PM
the imagery in this is superb I love it Nette you have excelled Shadow x smiles
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Date: 6/24/2013 4:26:00 PM
Nette , Love your last line . Great dream ! Your imagination is wonderful. hugs Anne
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Date: 6/24/2013 12:25:00 PM
Dreams of fantasy?..Reads like a winner to me..Great job that you have done with descriptive lines..If for a contest, should place high..Thanks for your visit to my work..Sara
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