Island

I need a vacation just for little old me, telling no one~I will just pack and flee. This crazy world has me buzzing like a big fat bee, I must be set totally free. The doctor ordered one sandy island by the blue sea, I will definitely agree. This island will make me carefree, I have not been like this since I was thirty-three. One huge tropical drink under a palm tree, oh no~now I need to pee.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/26/2023 8:34:00 AM

"2 Place" ~ Date Written:2/28/2023

Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2023 4:30:00 PM

Paula, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/4/2023 7:41:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed this fun "Island" write. Thanks for having your I Words - Poetry Contest. Have a wonderful day..................

Di11y Da11y

Date: 3/3/2023 11:30:00 PM

Haha I was nearly poemed out and then I read yours and I'm revived again! Lovely joyful poem that makes you think - 'I wonder! Should I just ship off and relax somewhere?!' congratulations on your win

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/5/2023 10:17:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed this write and it revived you. Oh yes, ship off/relax on my fun "Island." I can see myself writing under the tall palm trees, with a tropical drink. Have a wonderful day..................

Valsa George

Date: 3/3/2023 7:15:00 PM

A fun read ! Well done dear Paula. Congratulations on your win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/5/2023 10:11:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Island" vacation write. I am ready to write under the palm trees, with a tropical drink in hand. Have a wonderful day..................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/3/2023 6:58:00 PM

Lovely Paula, I could do with a vacation too, an island in the sun, if only. Congratulations on your success in Constance’s contest… Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/5/2023 10:09:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my write. Next time I go you can join in. Just think, writing under a palm tree, with a tropical drink. I am ready to go.... Have a wonderful day..................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/2/2023 6:04:00 AM

- Sounds wonderful... can I join? - Best wishes in the contest, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/2/2023 6:34:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Island" write. Sure, next time I go you can join me. We can write under the palm tree, as we drink a tropical drink. Hugs. Have a wonderful day..................

Deb M

Date: 2/28/2023 11:27:00 PM

Love this funny light and bright poem Paula! I want to go there!!! Debx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/1/2023 7:08:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you love my funny write. Next time I go how about you going with me??? Have a wonderful day..................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/28/2023 9:41:00 PM

Really fun, Paula:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/1/2023 7:06:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this fun write. Have a wonderful day..................