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Is Self Worth

Surely one could say simply walking down the street is no small miracle, unless of course, your planet recognized no laws of gravity Careening this way and that, a polite conversation would be quite a challenge, unless of course, language was obsolete on your planet Without barriers, interplanetary travel might be accomplished by simply thought transfer I might enjoy being acknowledged For the scope of my contribution To the entire solar-system Not just the size of my house, If I needed one….. 02/02/11 9:10 pm

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Date: 2/20/2011 8:44:00 AM
It is funny how some think that the size of a pocket book or a home, or a car that you drive tells of your contribution which in fact it tells absolutely nothing about who you really are. If there was thought transfer I think I would be banished forever. love phyl
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Date: 2/17/2011 7:50:00 PM
i ponder if the animals heve more gravity than us seeing that they need for legs to stand?. T, S.
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Date: 2/6/2011 1:53:00 PM
That would be good for sure ....To just think and be there in person but then we would really be careful about what we thought about ...Enjoyed your work..Sara
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:45:00 AM
Thanks for commenting on my blog. Your poem is very profound and I liked it very much~~
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Date: 2/3/2011 1:42:00 PM
wow, this is VERY good. What a cool way to write on self worth. Love it!
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Date: 2/2/2011 7:54:00 PM
interesting ideas presented in this, thank you for your comment on "a meal shared" , alas I am no longer in a house either , but I do have a deck to share with them.
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Date: 2/2/2011 7:26:00 PM
Today I said its a miracle, after recognizing that I might be human after all. And i say that in a sense that I have been gone from my mind for some time.. Ignoring the ways and laws of gravity.. Life is nothing but a small contribution and we may need it more than we think. I sure enjoyed your poem Jimbo, and thanks for your comment in my poem. I hope you are doing well. Bye.. Luv*Skat
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