Iq Test

I could care less about the four 
corners of insults, 
That intelligence invites; 
It is always the first straw of 
grass that’s grows, 
which reveals the popular outcast; 
As a youth, I found my image cut down 
into this manufactured silhouette.

Drenched in social rain, my peers 
had never found me more alienated, 
Then when I spoke fluently of diverse 
topics; 
They did everything in their power to provide 
a verbal umbrella, 
However, the texture remains weak and 
defeated.

This stormy parade that remains’ dripping is
indeed an afterthought, 
For within this cranial mansion resides 
additional rooms, 
For the more abstract and surreal 
elements of life; 
It is that secluded gland which reveals 
the renaissance of men, who wear 
infinite Fedoras.

Now wearing the shoes of a young 
man, 
A taste of charisma resides in my 
veins; 
However this slight addiction to external 
haze, 
Comes in second to my first drug of 
choice: Wisdom. 

Membership into this fraternity may take a lifetime; 
So don’t be surprised when resistance 
knocks at your door, 
Intimidated by the lion that dwells within 
your temple; 
Indeed intellect is the misunderstood 
fruit, 
That blossoms sweeter when accepted.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Behm Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 8:19 PM
Love the literary color you get out of this. I especially like the ending ... "indeed intellect is the misunderstood fruit, That blossoms sweeter when accepted."
Clemons Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 9:01 PM
Thank you Kurt. Appreciate the love.
Wash Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 8:41 PM
Intellect can be misleading when it creates arrogance, but nothing is greater than understanding and wisdom. Proverbs 4:7 Wisdom is the principal thing; therefore get wisdom: and with all thy getting get understanding. Once again you've given me food for the soul. Thanks
Clemons Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 11:37 PM
Thank you Lara. Appreciate the love.
Reams Avatar
April 3, 2015 at 8:02 AM
Wonderful write. God gave us wisdom we just have to learn how to use it the right way. A well written verse!
Clemons Avatar
April 3, 2015 at 4:04 PM
Thank you Tammy.
Locke Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 4:36 AM
Splendid verses, with splendid message. Really thoughtprovoking too. Great stuff.
Clemons Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 8:50 AM
Thanks Kaye. Appreciate the love.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 4:05 PM
Wow!!!! This a tremendous write.. I appreciate how you evolve with the topic and ends it well with wisdom..:) GBU
Clemons Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 5:35 PM
Thank you Olive.
Akter  Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 3:45 PM
Like it thanks for sharing
Clemons Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 5:06 PM
Thank you Farhana. Appreciate the love.
Makama Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 2:32 PM
I like your style of poetry Jiril... It puzzles the mind a lot.Thanks for yet another wonderful pice.
Clemons Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 2:56 PM
Thanks Funom.
Reslink Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 2:22 PM
wonderfully written, I love the bold and forthright tone toward the topic :)
Clemons Avatar
February 3, 2014 at 4:52 PM
Thank you Amanda.
Tarbert Avatar
January 17, 2014 at 6:27 PM
so beautiful. it definitely rings true for me. keep dreaming, vivi
Clemons Avatar
January 17, 2014 at 6:45 PM
Thanks Vivi. Appreciate the love.
Watkins Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 8:41 PM
Very nice imagery. I particularly liked "infinite Fedoras." Thank you for sharing. Gary
Clemons Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 9:31 PM
Thanks Gary, Appreciate the love.
Melugin Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 3:03 AM
Expressions that have not been expressed until now! Jiril, you are a poet's poet!!
Clemons Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 8:39 AM
Thanks Chuck. Only a true poet could relate. Obviously, you are one.
Cooper Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 5:47 AM
amazing
Clemons Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 8:58 AM
Thank you Poetess
Jackson Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 2:02 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem. "The four corners of insults" is a brilliant line. I was never any good at IQ tests, chimps could score higher! Best wishes Linda x
Clemons Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 8:58 AM
Thanks Linda. Appreciate the love.
Deschler Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 4:23 PM
Wisdom may come with age, but you are already very wise! The human brain can be a very powerful tool, if we choose to use it! An amazing poem! I enjoyed reading this one!
Clemons Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 4:30 PM
Thank you Kelly. Appreciate the love.
Fisher Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 2:46 PM
Enjoyed this poem very much. Like you said, membership may take a lifetime, but the process makes our life worthwhile.
Clemons Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 4:08 PM
Thanks David. Appreciate the love.
Brewer Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 7:45 PM
Wow, Very clever,,,get it? lol...but seriously absoloutely fabulous. Proper poetry,I have lots to learn. xx
Clemons Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 8:02 PM
Thanks Jenny. Appreciate the love.
Kilmer Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 10:35 AM
Knowledge is power my friend. Great write. Looking forward to reading more. ~Kilmer~
Clemons Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 10:53 AM
Thanks Stephen. Appreciate the love.
Barton Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 6:30 PM
Jiri, that was a powerful write you possess a true gift. keep writing thank you for sharing
Clemons Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 7:58 PM
Thanks Madelin. Appreciate the love. Check out some of the other ones. I'm gonna read some of yours.
Koven Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 5:58 PM
Jiri, it takes a lot of guts to be the stand out and fight for what is important. This is a significant poem and you deserve a lot of credit for writing it and making it available to us. Well done, my friend. Allan
Clemons Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 6:50 PM
Thanks Allan. Appreciate the love.
Duncan Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 6:15 PM
A taste of charisma resides in my veins; I like that,,, along with the wisdom ;} nicely done ;}
Clemons Avatar
August 9, 2013 at 8:16 PM
Thanks Debbie.
Farley Iv Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 5:02 PM
Wisdom is one of the most honorable things to seek after in this vapor that is our human experience! Great work- Patrick Farley IV
Clemons Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 5:11 PM
Thanks Patrick.
Rutherford Avatar
August 1, 2013 at 5:15 PM
Wonderful words of wisdom Jiril . Some people are ostracized because of their IQ.I enjoyed reading this tonight. Well done.Anne
Clemons Avatar
August 1, 2013 at 5:25 PM
Thanks Anne. Appreciate the love.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 7:19 AM
This is so good, the pursuit of wisdom is honorable and still even Solomon with all his wisdom turned his face from the source of his wisdom and became a fool in the process. You are a most talented poet, I enjoyed this piece very much.
Clemons Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 7:53 AM
Thanks Richard. I appreciate the compliment.
Secrest Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 12:06 PM
Great poem!!! I agree in a lot of ways, being inteligent can get you ostracized. Our modern society doesn't realize the value of being intellegent. I really enjoyed this, to favs it goes!! -Heather
Clemons Avatar
July 12, 2013 at 12:31 PM
Thanks Heather. Appreciate the love.
Lanre Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 6:42 PM
I read this twice. Wondefully penned. Great diction. The mood and the peaceful background tune!Great!. Well done bro.Gl
Clemons Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 8:25 PM
Thanks GL. Appreciate the love.
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