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Poetic Form: Sonnet
Inspired: 2021 October 25

*1st Place*
Pick-A-Title, Vol 26 -
Contest Judged: 2021 November 02
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

Image: Days to Come by UK Radar

Ghost and Folklore Stories from the United Kingdom - Days to Come

Remote land summon an aloof tempest, Bursting lights glint inquietude offshore, Edged mists intimate like an apprentice, Intrigue asserts the clouded to explore. Inland heating like a warming welcome, Landlubbers likely combative response, Unveiled inherent instincts that seldom, Aid dominions that are so nonchalance. Newt eyes nictating atop curling waves, A plucked forest acts as a casting wand, Amplifying teens conjure inward braves, Spirits arising maintaining the spawned. Imaged enthralled hazes flit Noah's ark, Sweeper-swept palls purify rainbow arc.

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 2/7/2022 8:24:00 PM

Congrats on your win!;)

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/7/2022 9:53:00 PM

Thanks, Brenda, for the laudation, Aloha~aka William!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/7/2022 12:43:00 PM

I thought I recognized your unique style William. Congratulations on your first place win my friend. I love your new name too. Aloha, Connie xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/7/2022 1:08:00 PM

You are appreciated, Connie, island-grown with an indelible knowledge of the aina! Maikai no, Aloha~William!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/7/2022 8:07:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on this new win. A creative story/write. Have a blessed day/week.......................

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/7/2022 8:15:00 AM

My first CONTEST, Paula, that bears my new name and particulars as I move forward in life, thank you kindly, my friend, Aloha~aka William

Eve Roper

Date: 12/1/2021 8:08:00 PM

Beautiful write, William, and I am amazing how uniform your verse is. Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/1/2021 9:43:00 PM

Thanks, Eve, I truly appreciate your noting the invariableness of my composition my friend, Aloha!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/3/2021 8:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful/creative~~story/write. I love your ending/last two lines. Have a blessed autumn day with your win...............

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/3/2021 12:22:00 PM

Hawaii feels like a northeastern state right now, chilly without the white stuff. I'm kept indoors to write, whereto, Paula, my profound thanks, Aloha!

Lennon Hammett

Date: 11/3/2021 6:34:00 AM

Congrats William! I hope to write like you some day.

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/3/2021 12:15:00 PM

OMgoodness, Lennon, a truly cool distinction my friend, Aloha!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/3/2021 3:56:00 AM

A beautiful invocation. Great work as your other works. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/3/2021 11:57:00 AM

Many thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate the value of your words my friend, Aloha!

Karen Jones

Date: 11/2/2021 4:05:00 PM

Congrats on a much deserved win!

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/2/2021 8:52:00 PM

Thank you, Karen, and likewise truly, Aloha!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 11/2/2021 2:27:00 PM

Wow, what a superb sonnet, William! Congratulations on your top win in my contest. As a poet, you remind me of the late, great Winged Warrior!

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/2/2021 8:51:00 PM

Wow, Edward, indeed! Your referenced poet who's truly missed was shared by another in my poem, 'Being Unseen'. A heart-filled thanks my friend, Aloha!