Invocation

Bowing head she begins, petitioning assistance, pleading earnestly:

“Forgive me lord, these feelings you inspire have long eluded me,
A stranger in your throne of divinity, I am distressed as can be
Regretful of bygones, replete in misery of blight-ridden streets
Where remnants of my foolish deeds lie dismantled and deplete
Near a battered graveyard, where in repose lies my father’s body,

Sorrowed I stood there, stilled as stone, grieving night all alone
Longing for his forgiveness for things I should have said and done
Choosing instead to be wild and undone, not caring for anyone,
In company of clueless friends where covenants of life I misread
Pretending to celebrate happiness in bonfires of souls wretched;

Sitting on this pew now, guided by invisible hand, I feel glow of light
Going back to my youth, recalling your halo on candles of delight
As feeble beats of my unborn child echo solemn words of prayer
Heartened by your revelations, while unconditional love I declare,

In repentance of contrite past, paying homage to a sanguine start
Gratified you blessed my child, donning enlightenment I’ll depart
In atonement you impart, humming your song in my grateful heart.”

And she steps out into the night crooning lullaby to her beloved child,
A single mother pledging to revise pages of fate in epistle of destiny
Promising to unshroud yesteryear’s dawns in tomorrow’s sunshine,
Vowing to guard her unborn from flawed paradigms, vagaries of time
Poised to defy malevolence in sacred pact with benevolence of life.

October 25, 2021
Placed 1st: Pick-A-Title, Vol 26 – Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Title chosen: Invocation
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Theraven Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 7:55 PM
Vijay, You have a talent for introspective writing in fine detail. Reach into those age old questions we all wrestle with in life. That's if you're lucky enough to live long enough. No guarantees tagged to us feable mortals. Save one. -Richard
George Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 7:41 AM
When contrite souls earnestly beg for forgiveness, a new revelation comes before them and yesteryears' shrouded dawns will pave way to future sunshine! This is a profound write with weighty thoughts, written in lofty rhyme. No wonder you are a winner as always. Proud of you fellow compatriot!
Pandit Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 7:45 AM
That is so special to hear--from someone talented as you. Many thanks, Valsa. Much appreciate your detailed feedback.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 8:48 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. Your "Invocation" is a wonderful story/write. Life is filled with both happy and sad. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Pandit Avatar
November 19, 2021 at 7:44 AM
Much appreciate your kind thoughts Paula. Many thanks.
Kauffman Avatar
November 3, 2021 at 1:56 PM
Amazing story and images, "flawed paradigms," bring this stunning invocation a brilliant light from within each line, Vijay. Congratulations on your win. Sending you blessings.
Pandit Avatar
November 4, 2021 at 12:23 PM
Thank you Sam. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.
Alex Avatar
November 3, 2021 at 4:16 AM
A great and beautiful invocation. Great work like other works of yours. Congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
November 4, 2021 at 12:22 PM
Thank you Christuraj.
Jones Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 4:13 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win!
Pandit Avatar
November 4, 2021 at 12:22 PM
Thank you Karen.
Ibeh Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 2:39 PM
This is simply an outstanding piece, Vijay. You always knock it out of the park! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest.
Pandit Avatar
November 4, 2021 at 12:22 PM
So nice to hear--especially from you. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Edward. Many thanks for hosting contests.
Gentile Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 2:07 PM
Back with congratulations on your top placement!!
Pandit Avatar
November 4, 2021 at 12:21 PM
Thank you Mike.
Daniel Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 9:00 AM
A wonderful poem of a mother's love and prayer for her unborn baby, Vijay:) a sure winner:)
Pandit Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 1:32 PM
Thank you Jo. Much appreciate.
Y. Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 2:37 PM
Wow! Vijay, What a moving and heartfelt piece on the contest theme. It was a top-notch write on forgiveness. Excellent job, my friend. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great weekend-Alexis
Pandit Avatar
October 30, 2021 at 6:38 AM
Thank you my friend for stopping by. Always a joy to read your comments. Much appreciate, as always, Alexis.
Sands Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 2:53 PM
Brilliantly and beautifully written Vijay. An important poem. I hope you have a nice evening :)
Pandit Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 5:33 AM
Thank you Heidi. Always a joy to read your comments. Much appreciate as always.
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 12:55 PM
- As always ... I miss words when I read your poems, Vijay ... I borrow Las' first line ... "What a wonderful masterpiece" ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
October 29, 2021 at 5:32 AM
Much appreciate Anne-Lise. So glad you stopped by with your kind remarks. Many thanks.
Poet Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 1:41 PM
What a wonderful masterpiece, Vijay, your words eloquently crafted to almighty God, are so profound and will be undoubtedly heard. My very best wishes for the contest.
Pandit Avatar
October 28, 2021 at 6:08 AM
You are so very kind, Lasaad. Much appreciate and value your feedback. Many thanks.
Canerdy Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 5:35 PM
Such a beautiful, reverent message about forgiveness, healing, God's love, and joy, Vijay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
October 27, 2021 at 4:47 AM
Glad you stopped by with your kind feedback Janice. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Roper Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 10:09 AM
A letter of deep emotions from the heart, words that God hears, but also those you think of. Great write, Vijay.. Hugs Eve
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 12:08 PM
Glad you stopped by Eve, with your kind remarks. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Rose  Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 9:20 AM
Your letter to God is being read from the angels tonight, it reads so realistic to me, nice one Vijay, :)
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 12:07 PM
Thanks Vienna. Much appreciate.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 8:24 AM
Filled with much emotion!
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 12:07 PM
Thanks Kim--much appreciate.
Cunningham Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 2:32 AM
We all take a wrong turn on our path of life and its only as we get older do we see the error of our ways. Brilliant poetry Vijay, I know this will do well. Tom
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 12:07 PM
I can imagine. Hope you fully recover soon, Tom. Welcome back.
Cunningham Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 9:03 AM
Thanks Vijay, just getting over a bronchial infection, it knocked me for six.
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 6:03 AM
And life treats them well when they take that turn for the better. Well said, Tom. Your thoughts are much appreciated as always. Haven't seen your poems for quite some time, since early October I think. Thank you for your complimentary feedback. Looking forward to your next poem.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 2:20 AM
Emotions press us into an invocation to change our lives into benevolent life. Singularly beautiful with emotions that stir the heart. A fav.
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 6:00 AM
You said it well, Victor. Always a treat to hear your thoughts and read your remarks. Much appreciate--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Horsman Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 11:29 PM
You pick a title, and turn it into a meaningful purpose for life. Such power does this bring to the fore of prayer.
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 5:59 AM
That is so nice to hear, Harry. Much appreciate your visit and comment. Many thanks for stopping by.
Nicole Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 5:05 PM
Such a wonderful feeling, knowing that the Lord will forgive those who truly repent. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. ~ Brandy
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 5:58 AM
That is the hallmark of divinity. Much appreciate your thoughts my friend, as always. Many thanks for your kind feedback.
Gentile Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 10:08 AM
Every day is a new day and your beautiful write clearly illustrates that with good will and intention, we can start over! Best for the contest Vijay!!!
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 5:56 AM
So true--people change with age--especially to protect innocent life. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Mike. Many thanks.
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