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Invocation

Bowing head she begins, petitioning assistance, pleading earnestly: “Forgive me lord, these feelings you inspire have long eluded me, A stranger in your throne of divinity, I am distressed as can be Regretful of bygones, replete in misery of blight-ridden streets Where remnants of my foolish deeds lie dismantled and deplete Near a battered graveyard, where in repose lies my father’s body, Sorrowed I stood there, stilled as stone, grieving night all alone Longing for his forgiveness for things I should have said and done Choosing instead to be wild and undone, not caring for anyone, In company of clueless friends where covenants of life I misread Pretending to celebrate happiness in bonfires of souls wretched; Sitting on this pew now, guided by invisible hand, I feel glow of light Going back to my youth, recalling your halo on candles of delight As feeble beats of my unborn child echo solemn words of prayer Heartened by your revelations, while unconditional love I declare, In repentance of contrite past, paying homage to a sanguine start Gratified you blessed my child, donning enlightenment I’ll depart In atonement you impart, humming your song in my grateful heart.” And she steps out into the night crooning lullaby to her beloved child, A single mother pledging to revise pages of fate in epistle of destiny Promising to unshroud yesteryear’s dawns in tomorrow’s sunshine, Vowing to guard her unborn from flawed paradigms, vagaries of time Poised to defy malevolence in sacred pact with benevolence of life. October 25, 2021 Placed 1st: Pick-A-Title, Vol 26 – Poetry Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Title chosen: Invocation

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Date: 12/12/2021 7:55:00 PM
Vijay, You have a talent for introspective writing in fine detail. Reach into those age old questions we all wrestle with in life. That's if you're lucky enough to live long enough. No guarantees tagged to us feable mortals. Save one. -Richard
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Date: 11/19/2021 7:41:00 AM
When contrite souls earnestly beg for forgiveness, a new revelation comes before them and yesteryears' shrouded dawns will pave way to future sunshine! This is a profound write with weighty thoughts, written in lofty rhyme. No wonder you are a winner as always. Proud of you fellow compatriot!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/19/2021 7:45:00 AM
That is so special to hear--from someone talented as you. Many thanks, Valsa. Much appreciate your detailed feedback.
Date: 11/5/2021 8:48:00 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. Your "Invocation" is a wonderful story/write. Life is filled with both happy and sad. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 11/19/2021 7:44:00 AM
Much appreciate your kind thoughts Paula. Many thanks.
Date: 11/3/2021 1:56:00 PM
Amazing story and images, "flawed paradigms," bring this stunning invocation a brilliant light from within each line, Vijay. Congratulations on your win. Sending you blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/4/2021 12:23:00 PM
Thank you Sam. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.
Date: 11/3/2021 4:16:00 AM
A great and beautiful invocation. Great work like other works of yours. Congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/4/2021 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj.
Date: 11/2/2021 4:13:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/4/2021 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Karen.
Date: 11/2/2021 2:39:00 PM
This is simply an outstanding piece, Vijay. You always knock it out of the park! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/4/2021 12:22:00 PM
So nice to hear--especially from you. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Edward. Many thanks for hosting contests.
Date: 11/2/2021 2:07:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your top placement!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/4/2021 12:21:00 PM
Thank you Mike.
Date: 10/31/2021 9:00:00 AM
A wonderful poem of a mother's love and prayer for her unborn baby, Vijay:) a sure winner:)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/31/2021 1:32:00 PM
Thank you Jo. Much appreciate.
Date: 10/29/2021 2:37:00 PM
Wow! Vijay, What a moving and heartfelt piece on the contest theme. It was a top-notch write on forgiveness. Excellent job, my friend. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great weekend-Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/30/2021 6:38:00 AM
Thank you my friend for stopping by. Always a joy to read your comments. Much appreciate, as always, Alexis.
Date: 10/28/2021 2:53:00 PM
Brilliantly and beautifully written Vijay. An important poem. I hope you have a nice evening :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/29/2021 5:33:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. Always a joy to read your comments. Much appreciate as always.
Date: 10/28/2021 12:55:00 PM
- As always ... I miss words when I read your poems, Vijay ... I borrow Las' first line ... "What a wonderful masterpiece" ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/29/2021 5:32:00 AM
Much appreciate Anne-Lise. So glad you stopped by with your kind remarks. Many thanks.
Date: 10/27/2021 1:41:00 PM
What a wonderful masterpiece, Vijay, your words eloquently crafted to almighty God, are so profound and will be undoubtedly heard. My very best wishes for the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/28/2021 6:08:00 AM
You are so very kind, Lasaad. Much appreciate and value your feedback. Many thanks.
Date: 10/26/2021 5:35:00 PM
Such a beautiful, reverent message about forgiveness, healing, God's love, and joy, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/27/2021 4:47:00 AM
Glad you stopped by with your kind feedback Janice. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 10/26/2021 10:09:00 AM
A letter of deep emotions from the heart, words that God hears, but also those you think of. Great write, Vijay.. Hugs Eve
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2021 12:08:00 PM
Glad you stopped by Eve, with your kind remarks. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Date: 10/26/2021 9:20:00 AM
Your letter to God is being read from the angels tonight, it reads so realistic to me, nice one Vijay, :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2021 12:07:00 PM
Thanks Vienna. Much appreciate.
Date: 10/26/2021 8:24:00 AM
Filled with much emotion!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2021 12:07:00 PM
Thanks Kim--much appreciate.
Date: 10/26/2021 2:32:00 AM
We all take a wrong turn on our path of life and its only as we get older do we see the error of our ways. Brilliant poetry Vijay, I know this will do well. Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2021 12:07:00 PM
I can imagine. Hope you fully recover soon, Tom. Welcome back.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 10/26/2021 9:03:00 AM
Thanks Vijay, just getting over a bronchial infection, it knocked me for six.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2021 6:03:00 AM
And life treats them well when they take that turn for the better. Well said, Tom. Your thoughts are much appreciated as always. Haven't seen your poems for quite some time, since early October I think. Thank you for your complimentary feedback. Looking forward to your next poem.
Date: 10/26/2021 2:20:00 AM
Emotions press us into an invocation to change our lives into benevolent life. Singularly beautiful with emotions that stir the heart. A fav.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2021 6:00:00 AM
You said it well, Victor. Always a treat to hear your thoughts and read your remarks. Much appreciate--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 10/25/2021 11:29:00 PM
You pick a title, and turn it into a meaningful purpose for life. Such power does this bring to the fore of prayer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2021 5:59:00 AM
That is so nice to hear, Harry. Much appreciate your visit and comment. Many thanks for stopping by.
Date: 10/25/2021 5:05:00 PM
Such a wonderful feeling, knowing that the Lord will forgive those who truly repent. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2021 5:58:00 AM
That is the hallmark of divinity. Much appreciate your thoughts my friend, as always. Many thanks for your kind feedback.
Date: 10/25/2021 10:08:00 AM
Every day is a new day and your beautiful write clearly illustrates that with good will and intention, we can start over! Best for the contest Vijay!!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2021 5:56:00 AM
So true--people change with age--especially to protect innocent life. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Mike. Many thanks.

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