Invisibly

"invisibly" falling asleep one night a life of the unreal played such were embraces whispers and so much more within this dream we had everything we had each other beauty and grace surrounded and shadowed this affair with eyes closed yet open wide nothing was missing as it should be a white knight was you a lucky charm was I suddenly I woke to realize our life of butterflies was gone no longer did I hear your voice or feel the touch of your hand magic of music became silent colors of the rainbow now unseen gone were our whispers and glances made only for you and me as my eyes opened with the sun reality found my pale heart I found myself in that moment unable to breathe without us its been said carry on with love and warmth of imagery the million memories of us I still hold but now invisibly SkyWatcher 04-29-23

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Anil Deo

Date: 5/9/2023 9:16:00 PM

Love and loss? Yes, on earth .. Love does end, if only by ill-health & death. Jesus says He went through the same "life," in John 16:33. Love and shalom ( smile, heal, hands) : thank u Lisa, thank u Lisa, thank you Lisa. Amen Friend & love-Poet

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/10/2023 3:34:00 AM

Well Hello Anil. Hi. Thank you very much as always. Truly. Never do I take your visits reviews comments or intakes thus it is I who say thank you. Love and Blessings now and always. Shalom and Namaste now and always. Remain Safe (smile smile smile)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/3/2023 9:28:00 AM

So poignant and sad, Lisa. Great imagery.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/3/2023 2:51:00 PM

Hello Andrea. Thank you very much. Have a wonderful night. Keep enjoying poetrysoup. May we all dream. Take Care (smile)

Bill Baker

Date: 5/2/2023 4:57:00 PM

Lovely poetry, my dear Lisa. I enjoy reading of your dreams and the joys they bring to you. Write On, my friend! Hugs, Bill

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/3/2023 6:16:00 AM

Good Morning Bill. Thank you Thank you. Never do I take your words visits or reviews for granted. Your commentary is most generous and gracious. Have a beautiful morning and day. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup. I will see you on your page. Blessings now and always. (smile)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/2/2023 12:54:00 AM

I don't have dreams. I have nightmares.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/2/2023 6:23:00 AM

Good Afternoon Victor. Hi. Thank you very much. Have a great week. Love Peace and Blessings now and always. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup Victor. (smile)

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/1/2023 11:42:00 AM

Hello Lisa, Nothing wrong with a little dreaming. Dreams are how we clean our subconscience. I wish mine were romantic. All I get is dreams about work.LOL Great to read you today. I hope you had a wonderful weekend:)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/1/2023 1:33:00 PM

Thank you very much as always Daniel. Hi. So true that there is nothing wrong with dreaming. Your commentary of work has me laughing and smiling because not that I dream of work but from time to time or over and over one of my former bosses appears and for the like of me I have no reason why she keeps appearing. So strange... The job itself was fine but my boss was a miserable person and boss. Thank you again. Enjoy the week and I will see you on your page. Blessings always (smile) PS - Never do I take your visits for granted.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/1/2023 9:49:00 AM

What an amazing dream you had Lisa, and on awakening beautiful memories to enjoy. Hope you're keeping well. Tom

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/1/2023 10:33:00 AM

Hi Tom. Thank you very much. Yes dreams are wonderful in every way. Life is the same and busy. I hope you are well also. I know there are so many of us who are missing someone. It seems as though our list of loved ones is larger in heaven these days than here on earth. Have a beautiful night. Blessings now and always. (smile)