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Invisible Light

Guiding ships is my Birth Right Pulsating warmth in lost hearts Unplugged artificial star... The Lighthouse is closed - sailors still see me... for Rick's Contest: "Parise Pariku"

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James Fraser

Date: 1/29/2011 10:29:00 AM

They saved so many, now many can't be saved. Some pay back we have given them. Wonderful poetry Iolanda....:)

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/19/2011 7:55:00 PM

This is very descriptive work for so few words.

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/17/2011 8:09:00 AM

Another wonderful entry Iolanda!! (ps...soupmail once again, dear!)

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 1/7/2011 11:38:00 PM

this is a good poem

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2011 5:10:00 PM

Good one..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara

Michael Jordan

Date: 1/5/2011 11:10:00 AM

Iolanda, I recently watched on the news where a lighthouse was totally covered in ice - It was beautiful - God Bless, mj

Constance La France

Date: 1/5/2011 8:47:00 AM

Very thought provoking and very visual, I read this several times, and each time was better, that final line, is wonderful, best of luck in the contest~~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/5/2011 4:33:00 AM

Wonderful entry with apt and right images for the invisible light unfinished personification of the lighthouse, Iolanda. Good luck in the contest