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''Invisible Girl''

I dwell behind a high stone wall not visible except in my soul, where a veil of misty haze fills the corridors of my mind, and my innermost thoughts are silently beautiful and full of weeping. Some days, I just want to be unseen, prowling and creeping inside my own head to ponder and comtemplate- Oh, I am but a speck in the vast universe of time, I am like a fragment detached, floating drifting, swirling eternally in the deep blue sea of imagination. Glorious and painful is the aloneness of being invisible, hidden, withdrawn from life, just residing behind my stone wall- where I lift my invisible pen to write poems in invisible ink. _____________________________ Written February 16, 2017 Poetry/Acrostic/"Invisible Girl" Copyright Protected, ID 17-8999-11-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Easy Sponsor, Skat Sixth Place

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Date: 1/14/2018 2:49:00 AM
Beautiful writing ...it is like rainbow of thoughts...............
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Date: 1/9/2018 10:08:00 PM
This poem has a haunting strength to it. Congrats on your well deserved win, BW.
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Date: 1/9/2018 7:46:00 AM
beautifully expressed sweet lady, congrats :) -luloo
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Date: 1/8/2018 10:59:00 PM
Wonderful write, Broken Wings ,congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/8/2018 10:05:00 AM
Broken Wings, Congratulations on your win. HUGS ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/8/2018 10:06:00 AM
Sorry for the double comment, I guess I over click. SKAT
Date: 1/8/2018 10:05:00 AM
Broken Wings, Congratulations on your win. HUGS ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/13/2017 6:55:00 PM
Broken Wings Are not invisible rather they stand out
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Date: 5/13/2017 11:37:00 AM
This is amazing writing Constance, the flow makes the acrostic "invisible"
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Date: 5/12/2017 10:58:00 AM
This was beautiful to me because the solitude of thought and daydreams is something I enjoy immensely. The ability to just get lost in our imagination is such a wonderful thing. Your poem is a wonderful thing too my friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/12/2017 12:53:00 PM
Chris thanks for dropping by and for that nice comment. I need a lot of alone time where i can just dwell with my thoughts
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Constance La France
Date: 5/12/2017 12:48:00 PM
James thank you for that awesome commemt, you really touched my heart. Oh I love browsing used book stores too! Can spend hours there and I am also going today but I am walking
Date: 5/12/2017 10:55:00 AM
Many of us understand the meta-life revealed in our poetry, Constance...have found myself immersed in Steingesser...and WS Merwin lately...you have exemplified such art here, my friend! instantly to my faves...worthy of framing for display...wow! Another reason I remain forever here at soup...for such stunning art to fall on me...as I am about to bicycle quite a distance to my favorite used paperback bookstore, looking and finding! rare signed poetry paperbacks!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/12/2017 12:51:00 PM
James sorry my reply jumped..see above please!
Date: 5/12/2017 10:21:00 AM
Hi Broken Wings , I love the way you use words ' prowling and creeping inside my own head ' great write , rate 7 :))hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 5/12/2017 11:49:00 AM
Niall, thanks for visiting my poem and for compliment

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