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I dwell behind a high stone wall not visible except in my soul, where a veil of misty haze fills the corridors of my mind, and my innermost thoughts are silently beautiful and full of weeping. Some days, I just want to be unseen, prowling and creeping inside my own head to ponder and contemplate- Oh, I am but a speck in the vast universe of time, I am like a fragment detached, floating drifting, swirling eternally in the deep blue sea of imagination. Glorious and painful is the aloneness of being invisible, hidden, withdrawn from life, just residing behind my stone wall- where I lift my invisible pen to write poems in invisible ink. _____________________________ February 16, 2017 Poetry/Free Verse/Invisible Girl Copyright Protected, 17-1058-035-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Contest - Ok, Toss Another One In Sponsor - John Lawless First Place

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Date: 10/4/2018 2:52:00 AM
Definitely resonates with me and so beautifully written. Glad to have found you, look forward to reading more.
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Date: 9/23/2018 10:04:00 AM
Very introspective. Invisible ink? No, I think not.
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Date: 9/11/2018 8:48:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, BW. Superbly penned.
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Date: 9/11/2018 6:42:00 AM
Constance, This is magnificent and can be identified with on so many levels. The final couplet a master stroke. Thanks for entering the contest.
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Date: 9/11/2018 5:36:00 AM
just beautiful Dear Heart...congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 9/10/2018 7:04:00 PM
Wowza. This is deep and contemplative. I definitely related to this. I think I wrote something along this same vein in my teen years (probably laughably horrible). Breaking out from behind the walls we put around ourselves can be one of the hardest things to do. Congrats on your top podium placement.
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Date: 9/4/2018 10:20:00 AM
Yes, you are right Victor, because no matter how great and superior a person thinks they are in the end we are all dust~
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