Into the Night:

Another fine mess I have myself in, 
No matter how I try I just can't win, 
In days gone by it never seemed so hard, 
Somewhere inside me, there lives a great bard. 

Until the day I come out of my shell, 
Deep down within me,he must always dwell, 
For it is up to me whom I shall be, 
And in the end, the whole world will then see. 

A simple man with morals and virtues, 
No fuss, no fighting, with little to choose, 
Whatever came my way I sang and played, 
And into the night my spirit will fade. 

But while I'm on earth I shall shine brightly, 
As bright as any star and just as free.
                        /|\
(Ten syllables per line)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lindley Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 6:26 AM
I agree completely with every previous comment . I marvel at you ability to compose such fine sonnets my friend. This one is a fav for me...
P  Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 2:41 AM
Whilst the great bard appears within your epic voice. Shine on you crazy diamond... :)
P  Avatar
December 6, 2016 at 8:22 AM
You mean to say there are people that aren't huge fans? :) I haven't been around as of late either, doing the catch up thing myself.
Wolf Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 7:12 PM
Am I to take it you are a Pink Floyd fan too? Now they are epic! It has been crazy here down under for me lately, haven't been on the soup for awhile, and am looking forward to catching up with /|\
Stover Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 10:22 PM
Wonderful poem. It really strikes a chord.
Wolf Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 3:31 AM
Thanks, Christy /|\
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