Into the Mountains

From distant plains they stand aloof and proud,
mighty sentinels that cast their lots against time.
Your better sense tells you they will lose;
you wonder as you behold them in their prime.

From piney hills they rise resplendent in the sun,
gleaming spires that hearken to the sky.
So unattainable, their fearsome reach,
you feel the strength of God is nigh. 

From quiet valleys 'neath the misty peaks,
burbling creeks betray the only sound. 
All else is caught up in breathless wonder.
All else ponders what it's found.

And it is where man isn't meant to be,
that he unveils his truest destiny. 

Written for "Mountains" contest, sponsored by Julie Rodeheaver
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 3:22 AM
Congratulations on your win, J.I., enjoyed reading ~*
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August 18, 2017 at 5:16 PM
I enjoyed yours as well! Thanks
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 4:48 AM
What a beauty! Congratulations James! Your ending is unforgettable! : )
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August 17, 2017 at 11:03 PM
Thanks; I found yours really soothing.
Barden Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 8:49 PM
Wonderful Sonnet, James, and a well-deserved win - love everything about this! Congrats! :-)
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August 17, 2017 at 11:02 PM
I deeply enjoyed yours as well. Thanks!
Lane Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 8:01 AM
A great write on the winner's list, James.
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August 16, 2017 at 3:56 PM
Thank you! Congrats on riding the top of it :)
Emu Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 1:08 AM
Thanks for taking me on this journey to the mountains James. Enjoyed the trip. Regards, Craig
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August 9, 2017 at 7:10 PM
You're very welcome; thank you!
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