Interlude

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For Constance's Contest. 25/7/25 "Said the young man, I dont believe in magic - Replied the old man, when you first see her you will" Atticus. Our time has come for us to slow the pace. Just relax, enjoy each other's embrace. Letting this rendition enter your soul. And allow your thought waves to take control. There is time to settle back, close your eyes. Repose with restful calm, as it implies. Immerse yourself in all my devotion. To feel the power of our love potion. Every offer of relief, not subdued. Make time for respite, in our interlude.

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Valsa George

Date: 7/28/2025 8:09:00 PM

As Rowena has commented below, this is a piece of poem so very soothing. Lovers entranced in each others soothing embrace proclaim love's magic power . When love takes hold, it is time to take a brief interlude from the frenzy of life and immerse in each others devotion. Beautiful poem. Congratulations Wendy on your first placement.

Rowena Velasco

Date: 7/28/2025 8:37:00 AM

Such a soothing and tender piece—it reads like a gentle lullaby for the soul. I especially love the phrase “our love potion”—it gives the whole poem a dreamy, romantic glow.